初中英语作文题目及范文解读
1．假定你是李平，请写信给你的美国朋友Peter，邀请他参加你学校为期两天的活动，内容需包含所列所有问题，并作适当拓展．词数：70个左右． What activities do you have in your school？ What you do in the activities？ When are the activities？
What do you think of the activities？ 要求：
1．恰当使用连词but、and，so等； 2．请关注全文结构的完整性； 3．信中不得出现真实的学校名称． _____________________．
Yours Li Ping
【分析】【高分句型一】
And we are interested in the life of American middle school students． 我们对美国中学生的生活很感兴趣．be interested in 对……感兴趣． 【高分句型二】
I think this activity is useful， so we must prepare for it carefully．
我认为这个活动是有用的，所以我们必须认真准备．I think+宾语从句．so引导结果状语从句．
【解答】Dear Peter，
I'd like to invite you to come to our \"English corner\" to talk about something about middle school students in America．（什么活动）
We will hold the English corner from this Saturday to Sunday．（时间） And we are interested in the life of American middle school students．【高分句型一】 So would you please come to our \"English Corner\" to give us a lecture about this topic？ I will be the host in this activity．（我在活动中做什么） I think this activity is useful， so we must prepare for it carefully．【高分句型二】（我的评价） Looking forward to your reply．（期待） Yours Li Ping
【点评】能够根据提示进行书面表达，能够围绕主题准确使用一定的语法、词汇、短语和句型等，清楚连贯地表达自己的思想，进而完成写作任务．
2．以下是Nick的基本信息，请根据这些信息和要求，写一篇英语短文，向英语报社投稿．（要求：1字数在80词左右；2有适当发挥）
项目
信息及要求
生日 出生地 主要事迹
1982年12月4日
澳大利亚
1一生下来就没有双臂和双腿，但学会了游泳，穿衣服，使用电脑． 221岁大学毕业后周游世界做演讲，与年轻人谈人生和梦想，至今有三百
多万人听过他的演讲．
3到过中国5次，2008年来成都帮助地震中的幸存者（survivors）．
你的感想
Nick is a world﹣famous speaker． ． 【分析】高分句型： 高分句型一：
…
Then he began to travel around the world to give young people speeches on life and dreams．然后他开始环球旅行，就生活和梦想给年轻人做演讲．begin to do sth．是固定短语，意思是\"开始做某事\"
travel around the world 是固定短语，意思是\"环球旅行\"give speech是固定短语，意思是\"做演讲\" 高分句型二：
From his story，I have learnt that we should not give up when facing difficulties in our life．通过这个故事，我学到了在生活中遇到困难的时候，我们不能放弃．that引导的是宾语从句，作learn的宾语，give up是固定短语，意思是\"放弃\"
【解答】Nick is a world﹣famous speaker．His experience inspires a lot of people in the world．He was born on December 4th，1982 in Australia．Unluckily，he was born without arms or legs，but he learnt to swim，get dressed，used a computer and so on．At 21，Nick graduated from university．Then he began to travel around the world to give young people speeches on life and dreams．【高分句型一】（介绍主要事迹）He has spoken to more than 3，000，000 people so far．He has ever visited China five times．In 2008，he visited Chengdu to help the survivors of the earthquake．
From his story，I have learnt that we should not give up when facing difficulties in our life．【高分句型二】（说明自己的感想）
【点评】首先要仔细审题，根据表格提供的内容要点进行叙述，内容要点要全面，表述的时候语言要地道，可以选用不定式，宾语从句等可以提高文采的结构．
3．假如你是Jim，上周参加了八年级一班学生举行的一个班会，主题是\"Should students chat
on QQ？\"．请根据下面的表格提示，写一篇英文短文．
人数 理由
支持 30 1、交友 2、丰富生活
不支持 20 1、费时 2、陪伴家人
3、…
你的观点
3、…
少聊QQ，多读书…
注意：1．短文必须写在答题卡的指定区域，词数90字左右（不含以写好部分）． 2．短文必须包括表中所列要点，但不要逐条翻译． 3．可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯． Should students chat on QQ？
Last week I attended a class meeting of Class 1，Grade 8．They talked about if it is good for students to chat on QQ． 【分析】【高分句型一】
It's easy for friends to contact with each other on QQ朋友们在QQ上彼此联系很容易． it is+adj+for sb+to do sth对某人来说做某事是怎么样的，it是形式主语，动词不定式做真正主语．
【高分句型二】
They say we should spend more time with our family members and friends．他们说我们应该多和家人和朋友在一起．
say后是省略 了that的宾语从句． 【解答】Should students chat on QQ？
Last week I attended a class meeting of Class 1，Grade 8．They talked about if it is good for students to chat on QQ．
30 of us think students should chat on QQ．They say QQ helps us make more friends．It's easy for friends to contact with each other on QQ．【高分句型一】They all say QQ makes our life more colourful．（支持和理由）And 20 of us think we shouldn't chat on QQ．They say we should spend more time with our family members and friends．【高分句型二】They also say we shouldn't believe in online friends．So they think that chatting online is a waste of time．（不支持和理由）I think we shouldn't spend much time chatting on QQ．We should do more readings and do more exercise．（我的建议）
【点评】首先要认真阅读前面的提示认真审题，确定文章的中心．注意文章文体、人称和时态．要求介绍．同时应选用合适的连接词或过渡词，使文章具有一定的连贯性．温馨提醒：考生必须认真查验是否有漏写情况，有无拼写错误及标点误用等．
4．学年结束前，Nancy所在学校的英文校报将征集\"班级之星\"的推荐信．假如你是Nancy，请根据下表所提示的要点，写一封英文推荐信，推荐以下三名同学并阐明推荐理由．
被推荐人 Sandy Harry
班级之星 合作之星 （Cooperation Star）
创新之星
见解独特；敢于尝试；思维活跃（或自拟内容）
推荐理由
耐心倾听；善于交流；乐于分享（或自拟内容）
（Creation Star）
Emily 注意：
1．表达中必须包含所给要点，可以适当发挥，不要简单翻译． 2．词数90左右，开头已经写好，不计入总词数． 3．表达中请勿提及真实校名和姓名． Dear Sir，
I would like to recommend three of my classmates for this year's Class Stars．
First，I think Sandy is the best person for the Cooperation Star．She listens to others patiently．Also，she is good at communicating and ready to share her ideas with others． Then，I hope Harry can be the Creation Star because he always thinks indifferent ways．He is brave enough to try different things．He often comes up with new ideas． Finally，I think Emily can be the Show Star．In class，she joins in discussions actively．She is never afraid of making a speech in front of the whole class and she usually speaks loudly． I hope that you agree with me． Yours Faithfully， Nancy．
【分析】这是一篇图表作文．内容是推荐三名同学作为班级之星并阐明推荐理由．时态主要为一般现在时．人称主要为第三人称．
写作思路：考生需要首先审清主题，围绕主题展开作文． 其次考生可从以下几个方面展开作文，即本文的写作要点： 1 Sandy：合作之星，耐心倾听；善于交流；乐于分享 2 Harry：创新之星．见解独特；敢于尝试；思维活跃． 3 Emily：展示之星．大声发言… 常用到的重点短语： be good at 擅长… share …with sb 与某人分享 come up with 想出… be afraid of 害怕… in front of 在…前面 【高分句型】
1．First，I think Sandy is the best person for the Cooperation Star． think后是省略了that的宾语从句．
2．Then，I hope①Harry can be the Creation Star ②because he always thinks in different ways．
①hope后是省略了that的宾语从句． ②because引导的原因状语从句．
3．He is brave enough to try different things．
展示之星 （Show Star）
大声发言；…（请考生自拟两点内容）
adj+enough to do sth 足够怎样去做某事 【解答】Dear Sir．
I would like to recommend three of my classmates for this year's Class Stars．
First，I think Sandy is the best person for the Cooperation Star．【高分句型】She listens to others patiently．Also，she is good at communicating and ready to share her ideas with others．（Sandy：合作之星）
Then，I hope Harry can be the Creation Star because he always thinks in different ways．【高分句型】He is brave enough to try different things．【高分句型】He often comes up with new ideas．（Harry：创新之星）
Finally，I think Emily can be the Show Star．In class，she joins in discussions actively．She is never afraid of making a speech in front of the whole class and she usually speaks loudly．（Emily：展示之星） I hope that you agree with me． Yours Faithfully． Nancy
【点评】本题是一篇给提纲作文，要求为英文校报推荐三名同学作为班级之星．短文要包含提纲所提示的所有信息，重点表述：who谁，what什么星，why推荐理由等方面．短文主要用第三人称，一般现在时态进行表达，要注意三人称单数的一般现在时的动词形式的正确使用．
短文层次清楚，条理清晰，first，then，finally，结构一目了然．第一段开门见山：我要推荐三位同学作为今天的班级之星，第二、三、四自然段，每段推荐一名同学．每段都按先总后分的方式，第一句话先提出推荐谁，再阐明自己举荐的理由，结构明晰，重点突出．
5．根据中文和英文提示，写一封意思连贯、符合逻辑、不少于50词的邮件．邮件的开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数．所给提示词仅供选用．
注意：请不要写出你的校名和姓名，请不要抄写本试卷文章中的原句．
假设你叫李华，最近和自己的英国朋友Peter在谈论各自敬佩的人物，他在上封邮件中向你介绍了自己所敬佩的一位作家，他希望你也能向他介绍一位自己所敬佩的人．请根据他提出的以下问题给他回复一封邮件．
参考词汇：work hard；kind；helpful；responsible；role model
Who do you admire？（a writer/a sports player/your parent/your classmate/…） What does/did he/she do？ Why do you admire him/her？ Hi!Peter，
Thanks for telling me about J．K．Rowling．She is really a great writer!
One of the people I admire a lot is my father．He is a history teacher at a middle school．He loves his job and works very hard．To make his students interested in history，he makes a lot of efforts to prepare each lesson．He is also patient and helpful to his students．
As for me，he is not only my father but also a good friend．Whenever I have problems，he is the first person who offers me advice and encouragement．My father is my role model．He has taught me to be kind，hardworking and responsible．
Yours， Li Hua．
【分析】【高分句型一】
One of the people I admire a lot is my father．（我最敬佩的人物之一是我的父亲） I admire是定语从句，修饰people，省略了who． 【高分句型二】
Whenever I have problems，he is the first person who offers me advice and encouragement．（每当我遇到问题时，他都是第一个给我建议和鼓励的人） whenever引导的时间状语从句．其中who引导的定语从句，修饰person． 【解答】Hi!Peter，
Thanks for telling me about J．K．Rowling．She is really a great writer!
One of the people I admire a lot is my father．【高分句型一】（我崇拜的人）He is a history teacher at a middle school．（他的职业）He loves his job and works very hard．To make his students interested in history，he makes a lot of efforts to prepare each lesson．He is also patient and helpful to his students．
As for me，he is not only my father but also a good friend．Whenever I have problems，he is the first person who offers me advice and encouragement．【高分句型二】
My father is my role model．He has taught me to be kind，hardworking and responsible．（为什么） Yours， Li Hua
【点评】在解答写作这类试题时，要根据短文的中心思想考虑如何开头、展开和结尾，设想几个承上启下的连词，将主要句型、关键词语草草记下，形成提纲，写时切忌结构分散，废话连篇，严重跑题．
6．题目1
你校正在开展\"光盘行动（Empty Plate Campaign）\"主题活动。假如你 是李华，请你为学校英语广播站写一篇广播稿，谈谈杜绝浪费粮食的意义 以及同学们为此能做些什么。 提示词语： save， produce9 menu， ask for， poster
提示问题：• Why should we stop wasting food？ • What can we do to stop wasting food？ Good morning，everyone. Our school is starting an Empty Plate Campaign to fight against food waste. .
Please start with ourselves now and we can make a difference. Thank you 【分析】【高分句型一】
I hope we all take an active part in this meaningful campaign.我希望我们都能积极参与这个有意义的运动。 I hope+宾语从句。
take an active part in 积极参加。 【高分句型二】
By eating up the food on plates， we can not only save food and money but also produce less waste.通过吃完盘子上的食物，我们不仅可以节省食物和钱，而且产生更少的浪费。 by doing sth通过做某事。
not only…but also…不仅……而且……
【解答】Good morning，everyone. Our school is starting an Empty Plate Campaign to fight against food waste.（点题） I hope we all take an active part in this meaningful campaign.【高分句型一】 By eating up the food on plates， we can not only save food and money but also produce less waste. 【高分句型二】To stop wasting food， we can find out what food students like most and help our school to improve the menu. At lunch， don't ask for more food than you can eat. We can also put up posters to spread the idea of saving food.（做饭） Please start with ourselves now and we can make a difference.（呼吁） Thank you
【点评】能够根据提示进行书面表达，能够围绕主题准确使用一定的语法、词汇、短语和句型等，清楚连贯地表达自己的思想，进而完成写作任务。
7．请你就\"什么是世界上最伟大的发明\"这个主题，发表一下看法，内容包括：1）按照你的观点，什么是世界上最伟大的发明？2）你为什么这么认为？3）你平时经常用 这个发明来做什么？（要求意思连贯、符合逻辑、不少于 60 词） 提示词语：opinion，invention， because， help，
提示问题： 1）In your opinion， what is the greatest invention in the world？ 2）Why do you think so？
3）What do you often do with the invention？ ______．
【分析】【高分句型一】
What's more， they can help solve problems and make students learn more．更重要的是，他们可以帮助解决问题，使学生学习更多．help do sth表示帮着做某事．
【高分句型二】
It is important for us to use computers properly．正确使用电脑对我们很重要．
it is important for sb to do sth表示对某人来说做某事很重要．
【解答】In your opinion， the computer is the greatest invention in the world．（最重要的发明是什么）They have changed the world and played an important role in our daily life． People can shop online if they don't want to go out．What's more， they can help solve problems and make students learn more． 【高分句型一】Students can watch English videos and learn spoken English．（原因）
It is important for us to use computers properly． 【高分句型二】I often use it to look up information． We should use it to study rather than play games．（我经常用它做什么）
That's all! Thank you!
【点评】能够根据提示进行书面表达，能够围绕主题准确使用一定的语法、词汇、短语和句型等，清楚连贯地表达自己的思想，进而完成写作任务．
8．根据中文和英文提示，完成一篇不少于50词的文段写作．文中已给出内容不计入总词数．所给提示词语仅供选用．请不要写出你的校名和姓名．
在学校的学习及实践活动中，你了解了很多北京的旅游景点．如故宫（the Palace Museum）、首都博物馆（the Capital Museum）、老舍茶馆（Lao She Teahouse）等． 假如你是李华，你的外国朋友Tony近期要到北京旅游．请你给他写一封邮件，告诉他北京近期的天气状况，给他推荐一个北京的旅游地点，简单介绍你推荐的理由，并告诉他应该做些什么准备．
提示词语：cold， famous， the Beijing Opera， warm clothes 提示问题：●What's the weather like in Beijing？ ●Which place do you advise him to visit and why？ ●What does he need to prepare？ Dear Tony，
I am very glad that you're coming to Beijing．
I'm looking forward to seeing you in Beijing．
Yours， Li Hua
【分析】【高分句型一】
The Beijing Opera is one of the most famous traditional culture．京剧是最著名的传统文化之一．
one of the+形容词最高级+名词复数，表示最…之一 【高分句型二】
You'd better bring a camera with you．你最好带上相机． had better do sth最好做某事． 【解答】Dear Tony，
Welcome to Beijing．Beijing is one of the most famous cities in the world．It has many places of interest， such as the Palace Museum，the Capital Museum， Lao She Teahouse and so on．Beijing also has a lot of traditional culture． The Beijing Opera is one of the most famous traditional culture．【高分句型一】I hope you don't miss it．（名胜古迹和传统文化）Besides， the weather in Beijing is cold． You should wear warm clothes．（天气）I think the Great Wall is the place you must visit， because it is one of the great wonders in the world．（建议爬长城）You'd better bring a camera with you．【高分句型二】 You can take many beautiful
pictures．（需要准备什么）
I'm looking forward to seeing you in Beijing．（期待）
Yours， Li Hua
【点评】能够根据提示进行书面表达，能够围绕主题准确使用一定的语法、词汇、短语和句型等，清楚连贯地表达自己的思想，进而完成写作任务．
9．根据中文和英文提示，完成一篇不少于50词的文段写作．文中已给出内容不计入总词数．（注意：请不要写出你的校名和姓名．）
假如你是李华，美国中学生托尼是你的笔友，他想了解一下中国学生在假期一般都做什么事情．下面的图表是你对班里同学假期活动的调查结果．请你根据这个图标给Tony回信．（简述调查结果，并谈谈你的假期计划安排及理由．） Dear Tony，
I've received your email and it's my turn to tell you something about what we Chinese students usually do during holidays． ．
Yours Li Hua．
【分析】【高分句型一】
I am good at singing and dancing， so I can put this love to good use by spending time with these elders．
我擅长唱歌和跳舞，所以我可以通过和这些老人们共度时光来好好利用这种爱．be good at…擅长……，put sth to good use好好利用……， 【高分句型二】
Not only can I take the chance to do something meaningful， but I can improve my own English by teaching others．
我不仅能抓住机会做些有意义的事，而且可以通过教别人来提高自己的英语水平．not only…but （also）…不但……而且……，not only位于句首连接并列谓语要部分倒装． 【解答】Dear Tony，
I've received your email and it's my turn to tell you something about what we Chinese students
usually do during holidays． I did a survey about vacation activities among my classmates． Here are the results．（开篇点题）
Among the fifty﹣eight students taking part in the survey， seventeen of them stay at home， fifteen of them take part in some volunteer activities and twenty﹣eight students travel either in China or abroad．All the students have classes．（调查结果）
As for me， I am going to volunteer my time to help others． First， I am going to visit an old people's home to cheer them up． I am good at singing and dancing， so I can put this love to good use by spending time with these elders．【高分句型一】Helping children with their English at an after﹣school teaching center is also a good choice for me． English has always been my favorite subject and I am among the best English learners in my class． Not only can I take the chance to do something meaningful， but I can improve my own English by teaching others． 【高分句型二】I am sure I will have a busy and wonderful winter vacation．（假期计划安排及理由）If you have more questions， please ask me．
Yours， Li Hua
【点评】在解答写作这类试题时，要根据短文的中心思想考虑如何开头、展开和结尾，设想几个承上启下的连词，将主要句型、关键词语草草记下，形成提纲，写时切忌结构分散，废话连篇，严重跑题．
10．根据中文大意和英文提示词语，写出意思连贯、符合逻辑、不少于50词的回信．信的开头和结尾已给出，其字数不计入所要完成的回信内．所给英文提示词语仅供选用．请不要写出你的校名和姓名．
假如你是玲玲，英国交换生Tom要来北京进行一段时间的学习和访问，他写邮件来向你询问北京的天气、适合去的景点及相关建议．请你根据以下问题给他回复邮件，向他介绍北京的情况，邮件的开头与结尾已给出．不少于50词，提示词供参考． Tom邮件中的问题：
提示词： windy， the Palace Museum， Beijing Opera， enjoyable， traffic， clothes Dear Tom，
It was great to hear from you．
I've heard that you're coming to Beijing． I want to tell you something about Beijing and give you some advice as well．
_______
Hope you have a good time in Beijing!
Yours，
Lingling
【分析】【高分句型一】
I advise you to visit the Summer Palace，the Great Wall，and the Temple of Heaven．我建议你去参观颐和园、长城和天坛． advise sb to do sth建议某人做某事． 【高分句型二】
The Great Wall is one of the wonders of the world and it is an amazing place．长城是世界奇观之一，也是参观的好地方． one of+名词复数，…之一． to visit是动词不定式作后置定语． 【解答】Dear Tom，
It was great to hear from you．
I've heard that you're coming to Beijing． I want to tell you something about Beijing and give you some advice as well．（点题）
Beijing is cold in winter， hot in summer and windy in autumn． So the best time to come to Beijing is in Spring．The weather is not too hot or too cold．It is the perfect time of the year to be outside．（天气）I advise you to visit the Summer Palace，the Great Wall，and the Temple of Heaven．【高分句型一】The Great Wall is one of the wonders of the world and it is an amazing place to visit．【高分句型二】The Summer Palace and the Temple of Heaven are beautiful too．You can also enjoy Beijing Opera． （景点）Before you come here ，you should know that the traffic in Beijing is very crowded． You'd better make a plan for your trip． It is necessary for you to travel with a map and you must be patient about waiting in line or large crows．（建议）
Hope you have a good time in Beijing!
Yours， Lingling
【点评】能够根据提示进行书面表达，能够围绕主题准确使用一定的语法、词汇、短语和句型等，清楚连贯地表达自己的思想，进而完成写作任务．
11．你的英国朋友Tony作为交换生来到你校学习．为帮助他熟悉校园环境，请根据下面这张地图向Tony介绍一下你的学校．不少于40词． 提示问题：
1． What buildings are there in your school？ 2． What do you often do at school？ 3． What do you think of your school？
Our School
． 【分析】高分句型一：
Let me introduce it to you．让我给你介绍一下．let sb do sth表示让某人做某事． 高分句型二：
It is between the science and the library．它介于科学馆和图书馆之间．句子中between…and…在…之间． 【解答】Our School
This is a map of our school． Let me introduce it to you．【高分句型一】（引出话题） In the middle of the school is a sports hall and the classroom building． The science building is on the right of the sports hall． We can read books in the library． It's near the gate on the right of the classroom building． We have lunch at the dining hall． It is between the science lab and the library． 【高分句型二】The playground is on the left of the classroom building． Behind the playground are the art room and the music room．（具体介绍学校的情况及在学校所做的事情）Our school is beautiful．We like it very much．（学校怎么样）
【点评】本文要求根据地图向Tony介绍一下你的学校， 首先认真审题，看清题目中的要求和要点；再根据提示内容，列出写作要点及每个要点中可能要用到的表达；然后紧扣要点，动笔写作，在写作过程中，要注意句与句、段与段之间的过渡平稳、自然流畅．本文时态主要为一般现在时，人称主要为第一人称．文章紧扣题目要点，内容完整，表述准确，语言的表述符合语法的结构，造句符合英语的表达习惯．
12．假如你是李俊，你的美国朋友David想在中国认识更多的朋友．你通过电子邮件，把你最好的朋友王浩介绍给他．请你结合以下要点，完成该邮件．
年龄、外貌 个性
15岁，方脸，高个子 慷慨、乐于助人，…（自拟1点）
爱好 其他情况 理想
痴迷于DIY，上周…（自拟1点）
对了解不同种类的鸟类感兴趣，是观鸟协会的成员；
最喜欢冬季，因为他喜欢…（自拟2点）
长大后周游世界
注意：1．词数90左右，短文的开头和结尾已为你写好，不计入词数． 2．短文须包括所有要点，不要逐词翻译，可适当发挥，使短文连贯、通顺； 3．短文中不得提及真实的人名、校名等相关信息． Dear David，
How are you？I'm writing to introduce my best friend Wang Hao to you． He is 15 years old．He is tall and has a square face． Wang Hao is generous and helpful．He often tells us funny stories and makes us happy．He is also an honest boy and he can keep secrets for his friends．He never says a bad word about others．
He is crazy about DIY．It was my birthday last week．He made a birthday card for me．He is interested in learning about different kinds of birds and now he is a member of the Bird watching Society．Among/Of the four seasons，he likes winter best because he likes making snowmen and having snowball fights with his friends．
He likes traveling．So he wants to travel round the world when he grows up．
I hope you can make friends with him．Maybe he can show you around our country at the Spring Festival． Best wishes． yours， Li Jun
【分析】高分句型：
So he wants to ravel round the world when he grows up．所以他长大后想周游世界．这里want to do sth表示想做某事．
I hope you can make friends with him．我希望你能和他交朋友．这里hope后面跟的是一个宾语从句．
【解答】Dear David，
How are you？I'm writing to introduce my best friend Wang Hao to you． （引出话题） He is 15 years old．He is tall and has a square face．（年龄，外貌）
Wang Hao is generous and helpful．He often tells us funny stories and makes us happy．He is also an honest boy and he can keep secrets for his friends．He never says a bad word about others．
（个性）He is crazy about DIY．It was my birthday last week．He made a birthday card for me． （爱好）He is interested in learning about different kinds of birds and now he is a member of the Bird watching Society．Among/Of the four seasons，he likes winter best because he likes making snowmen and having snowball fights with his friends．（其他情况）
He likes traveling．So he wants to travel round the world when he grows up（高分句型）．（理想）
I hope you can make friends with him．（高分句型） Maybe he can show you around our country at the Spring Festival．（希望） Best wishes． yours， Li Jun
【点评】这是一篇话题作文，作文题目已经给出，而且列出了要求．写作文时要仔细审题，每一条都要写到，注意前后句的连接，不要遗漏要点，必要时可适当发挥．
13．交换生Thomas想去太子湾赏花．但是由于受新冠肺炎（NCP ）的影响，需做好下列事项．假如你是李华，请你给Thomas写一封邮件告知． ♦全程佩戴口罩（mask）；
♦入园前需网 上预约（book online）；
♦入园时出示身份证和杭州健康码（Hangzhou QR code ），并配合测量体温； ♦开放时间：工作日8：00﹣16：00；双休日8：00﹣ 17：00． 要求：
1．80词左右，开头已给出，不计入词数． 2．邮件需包含所有要点，并根据主题作适当发挥． 3．文中不得出现学校和个人的真实信息． To：Thomas From：Li Hua Subject：Rules Hi Thomas，
Warmly welcome for your visit to Taiziwan Park．But because of the NCP，you should pay attention to the following rules： _______． Linda
【分析】【高分句型一】
You need to book online in advance so that the organizer can arrange the visit properly．你需要提前在网上预订，这样组织者才能妥善安排参观． need to do sth需要做某事． so that引导目的状语从句． 【高分句型二】
If your temperature is too high，you won't be able to enter the park．如果你的体温太高，你就不能进入公园． if引导条件状语从句． 【解答】Hi Thomas，
Warmly welcome for your visit to Taiziwan Park．But because of the NCP，you should pay
attention to the following rules．（点题）
Be sure to wear a mask throughout the visit．This will keep you away from the virus．You need to book online in advance so that the organizer can arrange the visit properly．【高分句型一】When you enter the park，remember to show your ID card and Hangzhou QR code．You must cooperate with the staff to take your temperature．If your temperature is too high，you won't be able to enter the park．【高分句型二】Also，make sure you don't forget the park opening hours．On weekdays，it opens from 8：00﹣16：00．On weekends，it opens from 8：00﹣17：00．（注意事项）
I hope you enjoy yourself．（希望） Linda
【点评】能够根据提示进行书面表达，能够围绕主题准确使用一定的语法、词汇、短语和句型等，清楚连贯地表达自己的思想，进而完成写作任务．
14．寒假将至，同学们即将迎来一个快乐的寒假．你的同学Sandy通常是这样度过寒假的，
请你介绍一下Sandy的寒假生活．
健康生活 快乐学习
1）早睡早起；多吃水果和蔬菜，多做运动；
2）常穿棉质衣服和运动鞋．
1）做2小时作业； 2）空余时间读书看报．
庆祝活动
1）和家人团聚吃大餐； 2）与同学聚会开派对．
注意：1．词数90左右．短文的开头已为你写好，不计入总词数； 2．短文须包括所有要点，不要逐词翻译，可适当发挥，使短文连贯、通顺； 3．短文中不得提及真实的人名、校名等相关信息． Sandy's Winter Holiday
Hello， I'm happy to tell you something about Sandy's winter holiday． ． 【分析】【高分句型一】
It's important for her to wear clothes made of cotton and comfortable trainers because they are good for health．对她来说，穿棉质的衣服和舒适的运动鞋是很重要的，因为它们有益于健康．
It's important for to do sth对某人来说做某事很重要． be good for 有益于 【高分句型二】
At the same time，she spends two hours doing her homework．同时，她花了两个小时做家庭作业．
sb spend some time doing sth某人花时间做某事 at the same time同时 【解答】Sandy's winter holiday
Hello，I'm happy to tell you something about Sandy's winter holiday．（点题）
She gets up at eight in the morning，and go to sleep at nine in the evening．She eats more healthy food and do more exercise to keep fit．It's important for her to wear clothes made of cotton and comfortable trainers because they are good for health．【高分句型一】（健康生活）
At the same time，she spends two hours doing her homework．【高分句型二】She likes reading，so she also reads some books and newspapers every day．In the afternoon she practices dancing with her friends．（快乐学习）
During the Spring Festival，she has a great party with his classmates． He also has a big dinner with her family to celebrate this most important holiday．She likes to set off fireworks with her parents to celebrate the Spring Festival．I am sure she has a great time on that day．（庆祝活动）
【点评】能够根据提示进行书面表达，能够围绕主题准确使用一定的语法、词汇、短语和句型等，清楚连贯地表达自己的思想，进而完成写作任务．
15．假如你是Tom Brown，接受了Xin Hua Middle School 的邀请，前去做讲座．请根据来自该校 Li Ping 的邮件进行回复． Dear Mr．Brown，
I'm Li Ping from Xin Hua Middle School．Thank you for agreeing to give us a lecture in our school next month．We suggest Friday morning，May 17th．What time would you like to start in the morning？In the hall or on the playground，as you like．
Please let us know if you are happy with the date and if you would like us to book a room in a nearby hotel for the night of May 16th． We are looking forward to your reply． Yours sincerely，Li Ping
邮件内容包括：①5 月 17 日没有空，深表歉意，建议改在 5 月 24 日（下周五）； ②选定讲座的地点； ③要求预订一间安静的房间；
④询问讲座的报酬（lecture fee）和旅途费用（travel cost）等情况．要求：（1）邮件必须包含以上内容，并可适当增加，使行文通顺、连贯； （2）邮件不得使用真实的人名、校名；
（3）词数 80 左右，开头和结尾已给出（不计词数）． Dear Li Ping，
Thank you very much for your e﹣mail． __________．
I'm looking forward to your reply．
Yours sincerely，
Tom Brown
【分析】高分句型一：
And the school hall may be the best choice in case of the bad weather． 学校礼堂可能是最好的选择，以防天气不好．in case of 以防，万一 高分句型二：
If you agree to the date，please book a quiet single room in a nearby hotel for the night of May 23rd．
如果您同意约会，请在附近的酒店预订一间5月23日晚上入住的安静的单人房．if 如果，引导条件状语从句，book a quiet single room 预订一间安静的单人房 【解答】Dear Li Ping，
Thank you very much for your e﹣mail．I am sorry to tell you that I am not free on Friday morning，May 17th．I will be very happy to come and give the lecture next Friday，May 24th． （5 月 17 日没有空，深表歉意，建议改在 5 月 24 日）I would like to start at nine in the morning．And the school hall may be the best choice in case of the bad weather．【高分句型一】（讲座的地点）If you agree to the date，please book a quiet single room in a nearby hotel for the night of May 23rd．【高分句型二】I will be very grateful if you can give me some information about the lecture fee and my travel cost．（讲座的报酬和旅途费用） I'm looking forward to your reply．
Yours sincerely，
Tom Brown
【点评】在解答写作这类试题时，要根据短文的中心思想考虑如何开头、展开和结尾，设想几个承上启下的连词，将主要句型、关键词语草草记下，形成提纲，写时切忌结构分散，废话连篇，严重跑题．
16．假定你是李平，最近收到意大利朋友Linda 的电子邮件。请你阅读来信后回复。词数80左右。 Subject： From：Linda To：Li Ping Dear Li Ping，
How's it going？We haven't written to each other for a year.I think both of us may change a lot.What are you like now？Which is the most important change for you？The biggest change for me is that I fall in love with Chinese tea.As far as I know，Hangzhou is famous for tea.Can you tell me how tea is produced in your city？Hope to hear form you soon. Love， Linda Dear Linda，
I'm glad to hear from you.It's been a year since I wrote to you last time. . I'm looking forward to your reply.
Yours， Li Ping
【分析】【高分句型一】
The biggest change for me is that I fall in love with English movies.对我来说最大的变化是我爱上了英语电影。 that引导表语从句。 fall in love with 爱上。 【高分句型二】
Watching English movies not only makes me practice my listening and speaking，but also makes me learn a lot about Western culture.看英语电影不仅能锻炼我的听力和口语，还能让我学到很多关于西方文化的知识。 not only…but also…不仅……而且…… 【解答】Dear Linda，
I'm glad to hear from you.It's been a year since I wrote to you last time.I'm a different person now.I became tall and strong.I took up many hobbies.The biggest change for me is that I fall in love with English movies.【高分句型一】Watching English movies not only makes me practice my listening and speaking，but also makes me learn a lot about Western culture.【高分句型二】（最大的变化是什么）
Hangzhou is famous for tea.Tea has a history of thousands of years in China.People usually plant tea on the side of the hill.When it is ready，it is picked by hand and sent to factories for processing. （介绍茶是如何种植的） I'm looking forward to your reply.
Yours， Li Ping
【点评】能够根据提示进行书面表达，能够围绕主题准确使用一定的语法、词汇、短语和句型等，清楚连贯地表达自己的思想，进而完成写作任务。
17．假如你是李平（ E﹣mail：liping2002@163 com），亚运会将在你所居住的杭州举办，现组委会向全市中学生发出一封邀请函招募志愿者，请阅读后进行自荐回复。 From：Asia Games Organizing Committee（亚运会组委会） Dear students
We are now in great need of volunteers for the coming Asian Games，please send us your personal information including your name，gender（性别），age，hobbies，E﹣mail address and so on.
Also，in order to provide the best service for the athletes in the games，what kind of language can you speak？What can you do for them in Hangzhou？
We welcome your application and look forward to you becoming part of our members！ Best Wishes！
Asia Games Organizing Committee
要求：
1.回复邮件必须包含邀请函中的要点问题，并可适当增加，使行文通顺、连贯； 2.回复邮件不得使用真实的人名、校名；
3.词数80左右，开头和结尾已给出（不计词数）。 To：Asia Games Organizing Committee Subject：Application for a volunteer
Dear Sir/Madam，
My name is Li Ping.I would like to work as a volunteer for the Asian Games in Hangzhou. __________________ Hope you can choose me！
Yours， Li Ping
【分析】【高分句型一】
As a middle student，I am interested in sports and can speak English fluently.作为一名中学生，我对运动很感兴趣，英语也很流利。 be interested in对……感兴趣。 【高分句型二】
If you are interested in me，please email me atliping2002@163.com.如果你对我感兴趣，请发邮件到liping2002@1 63.com. if引导条件状语从句。 【解答】Dear Sir/Madam，
My name is Li Ping.I would like to work as a volunteer for the Asian Games in Hangzhou.（点题）
I'm a girl of 16.As a middle student，I am interested in sports and can speak English fluently. 【高分句型一】So I suppose I'm qualified to be a volunteer for the Games.Besides，I have a good communicative skill and I'm considered to be an outgoing and helpful person at school.What's more，I'm familiar with the traffic transportation，the local food and so on.（要求） I'm sure I can also offer the best service to the athletes in the Games in Hangzhou.If you are interested in me，please email me atliping2002@163.com.【高分句型二】（联系方式） Hope you can choose me！
Yours， Li Ping
【点评】能够根据提示进行书面表达，能够围绕主题准确使用一定的语法、词汇、短语和句型等，清楚连贯地表达自己的思想，进而完成写作任务。
18．
From： Bill Hi， Li Ping，
How is everything going？ Last month， I saw a movie called My People My Homeland. It's such a great movie and it showed me the great change China has made. I am really interested in your hometown. I wonder where your hometown is？ What did it use to be like？
And what's the biggest change in your city？ Besides， could you please tell me what your city is famous for？ Hope you can tell me more about it. Looking forward to hearing from you. Dear Bill，
I am glad to hear from you.
Yours， Li Ping
【分析】【高分句型一】
What's more， the biggest change is that more and more people are living better and happier lives.更重要的是，最大的变化是越来越多的人生活得更好，更幸福。 that引导表语从句。 【高分句型二】
Today's Shijiazhuang is a beauty and modern city， which is famous because of its rich of human geological resources.今天的石家庄是一座美丽而现代的城市，因其丰富的人文地质资源而闻名于世。
which引导非限定性定语从句。 【解答】Dear Bill，
I am glad to hear from you and I am happy to share with you about my hometown， Shijiazhuang. （点题）Shijiazhuang is the capital of Hebei province， 280 km to Beijing in the south and 270 km to Tianjin. Shijiazhuang is quite different from ten years ago. In the past， there was a little road in the city. The road was very narrow and the traffic was very heavy. There were only three parks in the city at ten years ago. The air pollution was very serious. （过去的样子）However， with the development of social economy and science and technology， Shijiazhuang has been developing in a good direction. The roads get wider， and there are more and more parks. Of course， the air also improved a lot. What's more， the biggest change is that more and more people are living better and happier lives.【高分句型一】（哪些变化以及最大的变化） Today's Shijiazhuang is a beauty and modern city， which is famous because of its rich of human geological resources.【高分句型二】（以什么出名） It attracts many foreigners to come here to go sightseeing and makes here develop very fast. Welcome to my hometown with your family.（表示欢迎）
Yours， Li Ping
【点评】能够根据提示进行书面表达，能够围绕主题准确使用一定的语法、词汇、短语和句型等，清楚连贯地表达自己的思想，进而完成写作任务。
19．越来越多汽车进入我们的家庭生活，改善了我们的生活，但同时也带来了很多问题，如塞车和车祸，给家庭和社会带来极大的危害．作为中学生，我们应该怎样做呢？ 请写一篇有关交通安全的短文（80字左右）
内容包含：（1）遵守交通规则，如走人行道/过斑马线． （2）别在街道上或马路上玩耍和踢球．
（3）劝父母不能酒后驾车．
（4）你可以适当增加内容，让短文通顺，过渡自然． 参考词汇：sidewalk 人行道 zebra﹣crossing 斑马线 【分析】【高分句型一】
When we cross zebra﹣crossing，stop and look right and left，then go across the road fast． 当我们穿过斑马线时，停下来左右看，然后快速过马路．when当……时候，引导时间状语从句，stop and look right and left，then go across the road fast主句使用了祈使句 【高分句型二】
We should tell our parents not to drink before they drive．
我们应该告诉父母开车前不要喝酒．tell sb not to do sth告诉某人不要做某事
【解答】With the development of economy，more and more cars are coming into our families．We are happy that it has greatly improved our life．But unluckily，it has also brought many problems，such as heavy traffic and traffic accidents．（越来越多汽车进入我们的家庭生活，改善了我们的生活，但同时也带来了很多问题）
Traffic safety is everybody's business．We must obey the traffic rules．For example，we must walk on walk﹣side．When we cross zebra﹣crossing，stop and look right and left，then go across the road fast．【高分句型一】（遵守交通规则，如走人行道，过斑马线）We mustn't run through red lights when crossing the road． （不闯红灯）Don't play football on the road．（别在马路上踢球）We should tell our parents not to drink before they drive． 【高分句型二】（劝父母不能酒后驾车）
If everybody thinks traffic safety is everybody's business．I believe everyone will be safer． 【点评】在解答写作这类试题时，要根据短文的中心思想考虑如何开头、展开和结尾，设想几个承上启下的连词，将主要句型、关键词语草草记下，形成提纲，写时切忌结构分散，废话连篇，严重跑题．
20．为了使生活更美好，社会需要正能量（positive energy）．生活中，我们需要他人的帮助，也要学会帮助他人．请你在网上给What would you do？本期节目留言，内容包括： 1．你对节目中挺身而出的顾客的看法； 2．说说你帮助别人或别人帮助你的一件事例； 3．呼吁大家互帮互助，彼此感恩，让社会充满正能量． 作文要求：
1．不得照抄原文；不得在作文中出现学校的真实名称和学生的真实姓名．
2．语句连贯，词数80个左右．作文的开头已经给出，不必抄写在试卷上，也不计入总词数．
In the program，a customer stood up when a blind woman was cheated badly in a cake shop． I really admire her because she was brave enough to help the woman in need． The other day I saw a little girl crying at a street corner on my way home．I tried my best to make her stop crying．When I knew she was lost，I helped her make a call to her dad and stayed with her until he arrived．I found it pleasant to give others a hand．
In my opinion，we are supposed to help each other and be thankful for others' help．I strongly believe helping others will fill our society with positive energy．As the saying goes，\"The rose's in her hand，the flavor in mine．\" ．
【分析】这是一篇提纲作文．内容是谈谈生活中的正能量，呼吁大家互帮互助．时态主要为一般现在时和一般过去时．人称主要为第一人称． 写作思路：考生需要首先审清主题，围绕主题展开作文． 其次考生可从以下几个方面展开作文，即本文的写作要点： 1．你对节目中挺身而出的顾客的看法； 2．说说你帮助别人或别人帮助你的一件事例； 3．呼吁大家互帮互助，彼此感恩，让社会充满正能量． 常用到的重点短语：
adj+enough to do sth 足够怎样做某事 in need在危急中
on one's way to…去某地的路上 try one's best to do sth 竭尽全力做某事 stop doing sth 停止做某事 help sb do sth帮某人做某事 give sb a hand帮助某人 be supposed to应该 【高分句型】
1．I really admire her①because she was②brave enough to help the woman③in need． ①because引导的原因状语从句． ②adj+enough to do sth 足够怎样做某事． ③in need作为后置定语，修饰the woman． 2．I found①it pleasant to ②give others a hand． ①it是形式宾语，动词不定式是真正宾语． ②give sb a hand帮助某人．
【解答】In the program，a customer stood up when a blind woman was cheated badly in a cake shop．I really admire her because she was brave enough to help the woman in need．【高分句型】（你对节目中挺身而出的顾客的看法）
The other day I saw a little girl crying at a street corner on my way home．I tried my best to make her stop crying．When I knew she was lost，I helped her make a call to her dad and stayed with her until he arrived．I found it pleasant to give others a hand．【高分句型】（你帮助别人的一件事例）
In my opinion，we are supposed to help each other and be thankful for others' help．I strongly believe helping others will fill our society with positive energy．As the saying goes，\"The rose's in her hand，the flavor in mine．\"（呼吁大家互帮互助，彼此感恩，让社会充满正能量） 【点评】提纲作文是一项能够充分考查学生语言综合运用能力的题型．主要考查学生运用已学的语言基础知识和已掌握的英语写作技能准确表达客观事实，阐述个人观点，进行思
想交流的书面表达能力．为了提高书面表达水平，平时应加强阅读，应背诵一些句型、段落、甚至短文．只要读得多，背得多，就能出口成章，下笔成文．此外，还要了解英文写作方面的基础知识，掌握常用文体的写作方法．其实，用英文写信，记日记等都是学生力所能及且行之有效的练习写作的好方法．
21．假设你叫李华，是学校社团的负责人．请根据以下内容和要求给学校的英文校报写一篇短文，向同学们介绍学校的社团活动． 注意：
1．词数60﹣80灰右（开头和结已给出，不计入总词数）； 2．不得透露学校、姓名等任何个人信息．否则不予评分． 参考仰汇：solar power （太阳能）
Super Sports Club 观看球赛 打乒乓球、篮球 强身健体
Welcome to Our Clubs!
There are many clubs in our school． Let me tell you about them． There is something for everyone in our school clubs． Why not join us! 【分析】高分句型一
Let me tell you about them．此句是祈使句的肯定句．句子结构：V（动词原形）+其他．运用短语let sb do sth \"让某人做某事\"，短语tell sb about sth \"关于某事告诉某人\"，此句可翻译为\"关于它们让我来告诉你．\" 高分句型二
We can play table tennis and basketball．此句是一般现在时的陈述句．运用短语play+球类\"打…球\"，此句可翻译为\"我们能打乒乓球和篮球．\" 高分句型三
Drive the boat with solar power．此句是祈使句．drive…with…\"用…驱动\"，此句可翻译为\"用太阳能驱动小船．\" 高分句型四
This can improve our reading ability and writing level．此句是一般现在时的陈述句．运用短语reading ability and writing level\"阅读能力和写作水平\"，此句可翻译为\"这能提高我们的阅读能力和写作水平．\" 【解答】Welcome to Our Clubs!
There are many clubs in our school． Let me tell you about them．（高分句型一）（要点一，介绍学校的俱乐部．）At the Super Sports Club．We can watch the ball game．We can play table tennis and basketball．（高分句型二）We can keep fit．（要点二，在超级体育俱乐部，能做的事情．）At the Smart Boats Club we can make boats． Drive the boat with solar power．（高分句型三）Through these we can get a better understanding of science． （要点三，在智能船俱乐部我们能做的事情．）At Cool Books Club．We can read for an hour every
Smart Boats Club 建造小船 用太阳能驱动小船
了解科学
Cool Books Club 每天阅读一小时 写读书笔记
…（请补充你的一点想法）
day and take notes． This can improve our reading ability and writing level．（高分句型四） Why not join us？（要点五，邀请加入）
【点评】本题是图表作文，在解答写作这类试题时，要根据所提供的内容，考虑如何开头、展开和结尾，设想几个承上启下的连词，将主要句型、关键词语记下，形成提纲，从而完成写作任务．
22．假如你是王林，你发现班上许多同学不重视课外阅读．请你根据下表提示，针对这个 问题进行阐述与分析，并提出\"读好书\"的建议． 读书的好处
读书的好处
●增长知识，了解世界
●学会思考 ●作业多 ●没读书习惯 ●花时间网络或游戏
如何读书的建议
建议 （至少一点）
不读书的原因
要求：（1）短文应包括表中所有要点，可适当发挥； （2）文中不得出现真实的人名、校名等相关信息； （3）词数 80 ﹣100 左右． （开头已给出，不计入词数）
Reading is very important in our life． Reading has many benefits．Through reading we can learn more about the world．Besides，it can help us think better．Last but not least，reading can make our life more colourful． At present only a few students do some reading after class．Here are several reasons．First of all，quite a lot of students are burdened with too much homework．Still others haven't formed a habit of reading．They would rather spend their spare time on TV or on the Internet．
Here are my suggestions．For one thing，teachers are supposed to limit the amount of our homework so that we can have more time to read．For another，it's a good idea to form reading clubs and learn from each other． 【分析】【高分句型一】
①Last but not least，②reading can ③make our life more colourful．最后也是最重要的是，阅读可以让我们的生活更加丰富多彩． ①last but not least最后也是最重要的 ②reading动名词作主语 ③make sth+adj 让…怎么样 【高分句型二】
①For one thing，teachers ②are supposed to limit the amount of our homework ③so that we can have more time ④to read．首先，老师应该我们的作业量，这样我们就可以有更多的时间去阅读．
①For one thing…For another…一方面…另一方面…
②be supposed to do sth 应该做某事
③so that引导的目的状语从句，也可以用in order that． ④动词不定式作为目的状语．
【解答】Reading is very important in our life．Reading has many benefits．Through reading we can learn more about the world．Besides，it can help us think better．Last but not least，reading can make our life more colourful．【高分句型一】（读书的好处）
At present only a few students do some reading after class．Here are several reasons．First of all，quite a lot of students are burdened with too much homework．Still others haven't formed a habit of reading．They would rather spend their spare time on TV or on the Internet．（不读书的原因）
Here are my suggestions．For one thing，teachers are supposed to limit the amount of our homework so that we can have more time to read．【高分句型二】For another，it's a good idea to form reading clubs and learn from each other．（如何读书的建议）
【点评】能够根据提示进行书面表达，能够围绕主题准确使用一定的语法、词汇、短语和句型等，清楚连贯地表达自己的思想，进而完成写作任务．
23．有机会以交换生的身份到其他国家学习是一件多么幸运的事，假如你就是其中一 个幸运儿，请根据下面的中文提示，写出你的经历和感受．
A fantastic experience
时间 地点 活动
5 月 1 号到现在 Woodpark
1．与来自法国的组员一起学习有趣的课程（course）；上课跟我们的有 所不同，更注重训练而不是教你什么；
2．作为交换生，要向其他同学 介绍我们自己的国家（present）；
3．周末，安排一些观光活动．
收获
学到很多英国文化和历史；英语提高了很多；结交了来自不同国家的 朋友，变得更和坚强（independent and strong）．
感受
要求：1.70 词左右．
2．表达清楚，语句通顺，意思连贯，书写规范． 3．开头已给，不计入总词数．
A fantastic experience.I'm so lucky to have the chance to visit Woodpark school as an exchange student．The visit has gone well since May 1st． 【分析】【高分句型一】
I think it is an amazing experience我认为是一次令人惊喜的经历．
…．
think后是省略that的宾语从句．
【高分句型二】
More importantly，I become more independent and stronger than before最重要的是，我比以前变的更加的和强壮． 比较级的使用．
【解答】A fantastic experience
I'm so lucky to have the chance to visit Woodpark School as an exchange student．The visit has gone well since May 1．（时间地点）We have had some interesting courses with group members from France．Teaching here is different from ours．It is based more on\"Practice\"rather than\"Teaching\"．As exchange students，we are required to present our home countries．At weekends，we have gone sightseeing．（活动）
I think it is an amazing experience．【高分句型一】I have learnt a lot about British culture and history and I've improved my English a lot．During these days，I have made a lot of friends from different countries．More importantly，I become more independent and stronger than before【高分句型二】．（收获和感受）
【点评】考生首先要认真阅读前面的提示认真审题，确定文章的中心．注意文章文体、人称和时态．要求介绍．同时应选用合适的连接词或过渡词，使文章具有一定的连贯性．温馨提醒：考生必须认真查验是否有漏写情况，有无拼写错误及标点误用等
24．寒假就要到了，请你根据图画和方框内的提示词描述你的寒假活动，用完整的句子表达．
The winter holiday is coming very soon．
go to Hai Nan Island，with my family，
sometimes，learn to swim in the sea
sometime，go fishing with my dad
If，not rain，fly kites，in the early morning
when，go home，do my homework．
【分析】1．我要和我的家人去参观海南岛． 2．有时我会在海里学游泳． 3．有时我会和爸爸一起去钓鱼． 4．如果不下雨，我们将在清晨去放风筝． 5．当我回家时，我会尽快做我的家庭作业．
【解答】1．I am going to visit Hai Nan Island with my family．根据：寒假就要到了，应该用一般将来时，be going to+动词原形表示将要做某事．with my family和我的家人． 2．Sometimes I will learn to swim in the sea．根据：寒假就要到了，应该用一般将来时，will+动词原形表示将要做某事．in the sea在海里．
3．Sometimes I will go fishing with my dad．根据：寒假就要到了，应该用一般将来时，will+动词原形表示将要做某事．with my dad和爸爸一起．
4．If it doesn't rain，we will go to fly kites in the early morning．这是if引导的条件状语从句，主句是一般将来时，从句用的是一般现在时．
5．When I go back home，I will do my homework as soon as possible．这是when引导的时间状语从句，当…时候．主句是一般将来时，从句用的是一般现在时．as soon as possible尽快地
【点评】考查连词成句．结合所给的题干，确定固定搭配，主谓宾定状补结构．再完成句子．
25．假如你是Li Lei，下面是一封你的笔友Maria 给你发来的e﹣mail，请你根据e﹣mail 的内容给她写一封回信，与她交流看法，并帮她排忧解难．
提示词语：listen to，mother's love，care about，communicate with，get along with，smile 写作要求：
（1）语句通顺，书写工整；
（2）可用所给提示词语，也可以适当发挥； （3）词数在60﹣80词左右
Dear Li Lei，
I'm afraid I've got a big problem recently．My mother talks too much to me．She always tells me，\"Be careful while crossing the street．\"\"Put on more clothes．\"\"Did you do a good job at school？\"and so on．I'm annoyed（烦恼）．What shall I do？ Yours， Maria
Dear Maria
As a teenager，I met the same problem as you．But now I can get along better with my mother．Here are some ideas for you．
Your mother talks much，because she cares about you．Maybe it's not a good way，but it shows your mother's love．So I think you should listen to her．If your opinions are different from your mother's，you can communicate with her，and tell her what you are thinking about． If your mother doesn't take your advice，just keep silent and give her a smile． Yours Li Lei ．
【分析】【高分句型一】
Your mother talks much，because she cares about you你妈妈说那么多，因为她在乎你， because引导的原因状语从句． 【高分句型二】
If your mother doesn't take your advice，just keep silent and give her a smile如果你的妈妈不同意你的建议，保持沉默，微笑． if引导的条件状语从句， 【解答】Dear Maria，
As a teenager，I met the same problem as you．But now I can get along better with my mother．（交流感受）Here are some ideas for you．
Your mother talks much，because she cares about you．【高分句型一】Maybe it's not a good way，but it shows your mother's love．So I think you should listen to her．If your opinions are different from your mother's，you can communicate with her，and tell her what you are thinking about．If your mother doesn't take your advice，just keep silent and give her a smile．【高分句型二】（建议） Yours Li Lei
【点评】本题给出的材料较为简略，可发挥的空间较大，所以自己可以选择自己比较熟悉的内容发挥，利用自己熟悉的单词句式等．
26．假设你是李雷，正向好友Tom介绍无锡动物园．请根据以下所有信息，用英文写一封邀请函． 要点如下：
1 位于无锡西部，可以乘坐出租车或公交车去； 2每年会有来自不同地方的大量游客来；
3 能看见许多动物，猴子们喜欢上窜下跳，让人发笑； 4 准备些物品，例如…；
5 希望将来你能来，因为是个游玩的好地方． 注意：
1 短文须包括所有内容要点，要求语句通顺、意思连贯． 2 第四句省略部分补充1到2句； 3 词数60个左右． Dear Tom，
Yours truly，
Li Lei
【分析】这是一篇给材料作文．本文要写的材料比较具体，我们要做的就是运用正确的英语把这些内容表达出来．我们要好好选用词汇和短语，可以适当发挥．根据材料内容可知本文主要用一般现在时态． 高分句型：
①Monkeys like jumping up and down and make people laugh．猴子喜欢跳上跳下并使人发笑．句子中like doing sth表示喜欢做某事，make sb do sth让某人做某事．
②I hope you will visit Wuxi Zoo in the future because it's a good place to visit．我希望你将来参观无锡动物园，因为它是一个游览的好地方．句子中hope后面跟的是一个宾语从句，because引导一个原因状语从句． 【解答】Dear Tom，
Wuxi Zoo is in the west of Wuxi．You can take the taxi or the bus there．（动物园所处的位置及去的方式） Every year plenty of visitors from different places come here．（吸引游客到来）You can see many animals．Monkeys like jumping up and down and make people laugh．（高分句型） （在动物园可以看到的东西）You can prepare some things like food and drinks．（应该准备的东西） I hope you will visit Wuxi Zoo in the future because it's a good place to visit．（高分句型）（我的希望） Yours truly， Li Lei
【点评】这篇短文内容切题，意思连贯，表达清楚、完整．在短文中运用了一些短语，如：plenty of，jumping up and down，make people laugh，还用到了复合句I hope you will visit Wuxi Zoo in the future because it's a good place to visit．．在平时的学习中要注意多积累短语及好句子．
27．假设你叫Frank，你英国的笔友Simon 想了解你的生活，下面是他给你第一次写来的交友电邮，向你询问了各方面的信息和情况，请根据电邮要点，给他写一封回信．回信开头已给出，不计入总词数． Dear Frank，
I'm glad to write to you．I'm Simon from the UK．I'm in Year 8 at a mixed school near
London．I like meeting
different people，and I want to travel around the world when I grow up． Can you tell me about your looks，personality（性格） and hobbies？
I heard you went on a school trip last month．Could you tell me something about the trip？ What's your future plan？
I really look forward to hearing from you soon． Best wishes， Simon
注意：1．文章须包括所有要点，并有简要但适当的发挥； 2．词数 80 词左右，文章开头已给出，不计入总词数； 3．请注意恰当分段，关注书写整洁． Dear Simon
I am glad to write back to you to introduce myself and something about my life． ． 【分析】高分句型一
I like making friends with others．
此句是一般现在时的陈述句．运用短语like doing sth \"喜欢做某事\"，短语make friends with\"和某人交朋友\"，此句可翻译为\"我喜欢和别人交朋友．\" 高分句型二
I plan to play football in the future．
此句是一般现在时的陈述句．运用短语plan to do sth \"计划做某事\" ，此句可翻译为\"我计划在将来踢足球．\" 【解答】Dear Simon
I am glad to write back to you to introduce myself and something about my life．My name is Frank．I'm 15 years old．（要点一，介绍自己的姓名、年龄．）I am of medium height．I wear a pair of glasses．I have short black hair．I'm an outgoing boy．I like making friends with others．（高分句型一） I have many hobbies．I love playing basketball and football ，listening to music and playing the guitar．And I like fruit very much．I think it's healthy．My favorite subject is English．I think it's interesting and useful．（要点二，介绍自己的外貌、性格及爱好．）Last Sunday，all the students and teachers of Class 2 ，Grade 8 had an exciting school trip to the West Hill Park．We met at the school gate at 7：30 a．m．Then we took the bus there．（要点三，介绍学校旅行的时间、地点及交通工具．） It was sunny when we got there．Then we climbed the mountain．At the top of the mountain we sang，played games and flew a kite．We were excited．In the afternoon we went home． （要点四，介绍学校旅行的活动．）We felt tired but happy．I plan to play football in the future．I want to be an athlete．（高分句型二）（要点五，我的感受及理想．） Best wishes， Frank
【点评】本题是提纲作文，写作时能够根据提纲提示进行书面表达，能够围绕主题准确使
用一定的语法、词汇、短语和句型等，清楚连贯地表达自己的思想，进而完成写作任务．
28．学校开展评选\"最佳学生\"活动，你向校长推荐Sandy为\"最佳学生\"．要点如下： 1．Sandy又高又苗条．她脸上总是带着微笑；
2．她乐于助人．总是主动给我们提供帮助．经常帮助我们了解新世界； 3．她喜欢上DIY课程．擅长装饰房子．她总是为她朋友制作纸玫瑰；
4．上周在学校旅游期间，她为同班同学拍照．并把照片放在她的网页上供大家欣赏； 5．她喜欢和孩子们一起工作，她希望… 要求：
1．文章须包含所有要点，语句通顺、意思连贯； 2．词数80左右；
3．对第五要点作1﹣2句的发挥，文章意思完整； 4．开头和结尾已经给出，不计入词数． Dear Headmaster，
I'd like to recommend Sandy to win the Best Student Award． ____________
I think Sandy has all the qualities to be the Best Student．I hope you can agree with me．
Yours faithfully，
Millie．
【分析】【高分句型一】
She is good at decorating the house．她擅长装饰房子． be good at 擅长… 【高分句型二】
She hopes to be an excellent teacher她希望成为一名优秀的老师． hope to do sth 希望做某事 【解答】Dear Headmaster，
I'd like to recommend Sandy to win the Best Student Award．（点题）
Sandy is tall and slim．She often wears a smile on her face．（外貌）She is helpful．She always offers us help．She helps us learn about the new world．（乐于助人）She likes taking a course in DIY．She is good at decorating the house．【高分句型一】She makes paper roses for her friends．（爱好）Last week，she took photos for her classmates during the school trip．She put the pictures on her homepage to let the classmates enjoy them．（上周旅游经历）She likes to work with children．She hopes to be an excellent teacher．【高分句型二】（梦想） I think Sandy has all the qualities to be the Best Student．I hope you can agree with me．
Yours faithfully，
Millie．
【点评】写作要抓住要点．要在\"准\"字上下功夫．在写作中注意人称与谓语动词的数关系和动词时态等诸多方面．在平时的练习中，注意多背诵范文，对于写的好的句子要进行默写，这样在写作时就能写出准确地道的作文．
29．假定你是李华，上个星期你的英国笔友Daniel给你发了一封电子邮件，想了解你的家庭作业的情况，根据信中的内容及你的实际用英语回复． To：Lihua@ china．com From：Daniel@ britain．com Subject：My homework Dear Lihua
I hear that Chinese students work hard and always have too much homework．Is that true？Would you please tell me something about your homework？ ●How do you like your homework？And why？
●How much time do you spend on your homework every day？What homework do you do usually？
●What homework once impressed you most？And why？ ● What is your ideal homework？And why？ All the best， Daniel
注意：1．词数90左右，开头和结尾已经写好，不计入总词数； 2．回复须包括所有要点，可适当发挥，使全文连贯、通顺； 3．文中不得提及真实的人名、校名等相关信息． Dear Daniel，
Thank you so much for your email．I'm very happy to tell you something about my homework． I think homework is of great importance to/for a student because homework is a good way to check or test what I have learned． /I can go over my lessons by doing different kinds of homework．I usually spend about more than two hours on my homework of different subjects，such as Chinese，Maths，English，Chemistry．I remember I spent two hours working together with my classmates to finish an English project．The special homework made me learn about teamwork．I also come to know everyone has their own advantage．I think the best homework is what can make me not only learn but also think．
What about your homework？Is it interesting or boring？I am looking forward to your reply． Best wishes， Li Hua
【分析】【高分句型一】
I think homework is of great importance for a student because homework is a good way to check or test what I have learned．我认为家庭作业对学生来说是非常重要的，因为家庭作业是检查或测试我所学到的东西的好方法．
I think+宾语从句；be of great importance 非常重要；because引导原因状语从句；a good way to do sth做某事的好方法；what 引导宾语从句 【高分句型二】
I can go over my lessons by doing different kinds of homework．我可以通过做不同种类的家
庭作业来复习功课． by doing sth通过做某事． 【解答】Dear Daniel，
Thank you so much for your email．I'm very happy to tell you something about my homework．（引起下文）
I think homework is of great importance for a student because homework is a good way to check or test what I have learned．【高分句型一】I can go over my lessons by doing different kinds of homework．【高分句型二】I usually spend about more than two hours on my homework of different subjects，such as Chinese，Maths，English，Chemistry．I remember I spent two hours working together with my classmates to finish an English project．The special homework made me learn about teamwork．I also come to know everyone has their own advantage．I think the best homework is what can make me not only learn but also think．（我的作业情况及学习经验）
What about your homework？Is it interesting or boring？I am looking forward to your reply．（期待回信） Best wishes， Li Hua
【点评】能够根据提示进行书面表达，能够围绕主题准确使用一定的语法、词汇、短语和句型等，清楚连贯地表达自己的思想，进而完成写作任务．
30．学校的英语俱乐部要选举本学期的学期之星奖（this term's Young Star Award）． 你想推荐 Nick Brown
参加评选．请在推荐信中至少写出三个理由，并适当发挥． 注意：
1．文中不得出现你的真实姓名和学校名称
2．语言通顺，意思连贯，条理清楚，书写规范；可适当发挥 3．词数 80 左右，邮件开头与结尾已经给出，不计入总词数． Dear Chairman，
__________________________________________．
Yours faithfully，
James King
【分析】【高分句型一】
He spends much time on school activities．他花很多时间在学校活动上． spend some time on sth …\"在某事上花费时间\"． 【高分句型二】
I look forward to your reply．我期待着您的答复． look forward to sth \"期待某事\"． 【解答】Dear Chairman，
I would like to recommend Nick Brown to be this term's Young Star Award．（点题）
Nick Brown can plan school activities well． He spends much time on school activities．【高分句型一】
He also does well in cycling． Maybe that's why he is full of energy every day．Nick Brown is very brave． He thinks he can do almost anything if he tries his best．He is really kind． Last week， he visited an old people's home． He helped clean their rooms． And now he plans to go there every month． He is a person full of love．（分别从能力、性格及所做的事情三个方面介绍Nick Brown）
Our classmates all think that Nick Brown should get the award． （总结全文） I look forward to your reply．【高分句型二】 （希望） Yours faithfully， James King
【点评】能够根据提示进行书面表达，能够围绕主题准确使用一定的语法、词汇、短语和句型等，清楚连贯地表达自己的思想，进而完成写作任务．
31．你是阳光中学的，来自美国的初中生游学团要来学校访问交流。你将代表全体同学发言，请用英语写一篇欢迎辞，向他们介绍你自己和你的学校。 注意：
（1）文中不得出现你的真实姓名和学校名称； （2）语言通顺，意思连贯，条理清楚，书写规范； （3）文中必须涵盖以下信息，并做适当发挥。
（4）词数80左右，欢迎辞的开头和结尾已经给出，不计入总词数。 About me Favourite subjects Hobbies
My school Teachers Facilities （设施） After﹣school activities Classmates …
Dear friends，
Welcome to our Sunshine Middle School.I am ……
. I hope you have a good time in our school.We are so glad to share our wonderful school life with you.
【分析】【高分句型一】
I am glad to introduce myself and our school to you.introduce sth to sb表示\"把某物介绍给某人\"这句话意为：我很高兴把我自己和我们的学校介绍给你。 【高分句型二】
We are happy to stay at school everyday.be happy to do sth表示\"很高兴做某事\"。 这句话意为：我们每天待在学校都很高兴。 【解答】Dear friends，
Welcome to our Sunshine Middle School.I am WangGang.I am glad to introduce myself and our school to you（高分句型一）.（简要说明目的）
As for me，I like Chinese and English.But my favourite subject is Maths.I like to deal with some difficult points and then I can get a sense of achivement when I work out them.After class，I like playing badminton with my classmates.As for our school.We have nice teachers，they are kind to us.There are a lot of facilities in our school.such as three teaching buildings and a library.After class，we have many activities.There are different clubs.such as English club，chess club，swimming club，art club and so on.Our classmates are friendly，too.we help each other all the time.We have a good time at school every day（高分句型二）.（介绍自己以及学校） I hope you have a good time in our school.We are so glad to share our wonderful school life with you.（结尾表明期望）
【点评】根据相关背景与表格中的要点，逐一写出相关内容即可。
32．最近，你们学校公众号\"佳文共赏\"栏日将以\"My hero\"为题开展一次作文 评选，请以此为题写一篇短文，介绍你所敬佩的一位文体类名人，向该栏目投稿．
My hero Talents and achievements Difficulties he / she met and how he /
she dealt with them
Charity work
Your opinion（s） about him / her 要求：1． 80 词左右，语句流畅通顺； 2． 文章需涵盖以上要点，并作适当发挥； 3． 文中不得出现任何考生真实姓名； 【分析】【高分句型一】
I think he is my hero， not only because he is famous for playing badminton， but also because he is a kind man．
我认为他是我的英雄，不仅因为他以打羽毛球而闻名，也因为他是一个善良的人．I think+宾语从句； not only…but also…不仅…而且… 【高分句型二】
I want to work hard to make great progress in my study．
我要努力学习，取得更大进步．want to do sth想要做某事；动词不定式做目的状语，make progress取得进步． 【解答】My hero
My name is Zhao Ming Hao．I am crazy about sports．My hero is Lin Dan（点题，我的偶像是林丹）．Lin Dan has got great achievements．He has a gift for playing badminton and won won the badminton Olympic championship．（天赋和成就）He had some technical problems in training， but he never gives up achieving success through many years' of hard work．（遇到的问题以及解决办法）He loves charity and has donated far more than one million yuan to charity
Useful expression：
have a gift for， win an award for， … never give up achieve success through， …
far more than， devote…to… be famous for / as， …
successively．（慈善工作）I think he is my hero， not only because he is famous for playing badminton， but also because he is a kind man． 【高分句型一】
As a student，I decide to learn from Lin Dan．I will try to achieve a balance between my school work and hobbies．I want to work hard to make great progress in my study．【高分句型二】（我的观点和努力方向）
【点评】能够根据提示进行书面表达，能够围绕主题准确使用一定的语法、词汇、短语和句型等，清楚连贯地表达自己的思想，进而完成写作任务．
33．
our
Every child loves his mother． When we grow up， we should still respect our mother and try best to care for her． Read the two pictures and write a passage about them． Your writing should include the following： 1． To describe the two pictures．
2． To tell us your opinion about the two pictures．
3． To tell us what you want to do for your mother now and in the future． 注意：
1．文中不得出现你的真实姓名和学校名称； 2．语言通顺，意思连贯，条理清楚，书写规范； 3．词数80左右．
【分析】【高分句型一】Therefore， we should pay more attention to the elder's inner feelings．因此，我们应该多关注老人的内在情感． pay attention to \"关注、注意\"，后接名词、代词或动名词． inner feelings 内在情感．
【高分句型二】We had better have more communication with them．我们最好与他们多交流．had better （not） do sth．最好 （不）做某事．have communication with sb． 与某人交流．
【解答】In the first picture， four young people are celebrating their mother's birthday． The young are happily taking photos， while their mother looks lonely． In the second picture， the old woman sits alone at home．（介绍两幅图片内容） From the two pictures， we know the old woman's children seldom spend time with her， except some get﹣together days． And sometimes they get together， but the young ignore the elder's inner feelings． I can feel the mom is unhappy and lonely． （根据图片描述自己的看法） Therefore， we should pay more attention to the elder's inner feelings． 【高分句型一】We are expected to spend more time with our friends． We had better have more communication with them． 【高分句型二】We can go
shopping， cook dinner or watch TV with our parents． All in all，we should return home and pay more attention to parents's inner feelings． Only in this way， we can take good care of them．（结尾总结，升华主题）
【点评】本篇写作需注意要求中所提供的要点，不可遗漏．需在平时积累相关的词汇，写作中注意语义通顺，符合逻辑关系．上下文之间可以适当使用连接词．
34．假设你叫李华，是无锡市阳光中学（Wuxi Sunshine Middle School）的一名初三学生，近日，看到无锡市图书馆Kids English Reading Club 招募暑期志愿者的一则广告．你打算结合自己的经历和特长写信申请．广告如下： Library Volunteers Wanted
Do you enjoy reading English books？
Do you want to share that experience with little kids？
We're looking for devoted volunteers to pick and bring suitable books for the members of our Kids English Reading Club．You are also needed to talk with the members．
WORKING TIME：9 A．M．to 12 NOON every Monday，Wednesday and Friday in the summer vocation
APPLICATION LETTER：contact Mr Wang at kidsreading@126．com Thank you for supporting a good course in boingling change． 注意事项：
1．申请信要求符合情境、语句通顺、意思连贯，可适当增加细节； 2．词数在 90 个左右，申请信的首尾已在答题卷上给出，不计入总词数； 3．申请信不得提及真实的人名、校名等相关信息； 4．申请信内容必须写在答题卷的指定位置上． __________．
【分析】【高分句型一】
I'm writing to you because I want to be a volunteer in your library．我给你写信是因为我想成为你图书馆的一名志愿者． because引导的原因状语从句． 【高分句型二】
I'll have a freer summer vocation since I'm leaving middle school soon．我将有一个更自由的暑假，因为我马上就要中学毕业了． since引导的时间状语从句． 【解答】Dear Mr Wang，
I'm Li Hua，a Grade 9 student from Wuxi Sunshine Middle School．I'm writing to you because I want to be a volunteer in your library．【高分句型一】（写信目的）
For one thing，I'll have a freer summer vocation since I'm leaving middle school soon．【高分句型二】I think I'll have enough spare time for the job．For another，I have been interested in reading English books since I was little．I know perfectly well which books are suitable for little kids．What's more，I'm patient enough to work with children．I will devote myself to the
work．In general，I'm confident to serve as a good volunteer．（自己的优势） I'm looking forward to your early reply． （期待）
Yours sincerely，
Li Hua
【点评】能够根据提示进行书面表达，能够围绕主题准确使用一定的语法、词汇、短语和句型等，清楚连贯地表达自己的思想，进而完成写作任务．
35．假设你是顾华，你的英国网友Sam给你发了一封邮件，想详细了解你在艺术领域方面的喜好．请认真阅读下面的邮件，并根据邮件中的内容用英语回复．
To：Guhua@ 163．com From：Sam@yahoo．com Subject：Art Form
Dear Hua，
Glad to hear from you．You said you like art better than sports．I'd like to know more about it．
1．What's your favourite art form？What do you think of it？
2．Who has influenced you most in this area？What can you learn from him/her？ 3．Do you have any problems when you practice it？What have you done with them？ I'm looking forward to hearing from you．
All the best， Sam 注意事项：
1．英文邮件须包括所有提示内容，可适当发挥，要求语句通顺，意思连贯； 2．词数90个左右，邮件的首尾已在答题卷上给出，不计入总词数； 3．文中不得提及真实的人名、校名等相关信息； 4．邮件内容必须写在答题卷的指定位置．
To：Sam@yahoo．com From：Guhua@163．com Subject：Re：Art Form
Dear Sam，
I'm happy to tell you about my favourite art form．
Do you love art？Write to me soon．
Best wishes， Gu Hua
【分析】【高分句型一】
I think dancing can make me relax．我认为跳舞可以让我放松． I think+宾语从句． make sb+形容词，使某人… 【高分句型二】
At first，it was difficult for me to perform well when I practiced it．起初，当我练习的时候很难表现好．
It is+形容词 for sb to do sth．某人做某事是…的． when引导时间状语从句． 【解答】Dear Sam，
I'm happy to tell you about my favourite art form．（点题）
I like dancing best．I think dancing can make me relax．【高分句型一】We can show our love for life through dancing．Dancing cheers me up when I am blue and calms me down when I am too excited．（我喜欢的艺术形式及我的看法）My favorite dancer is Jin Xing．She is one of the greatest dancers in China．I learned a lot from him．She teaches me what to when I am in trouble．It is the most important to try to achieve your dream．（谁对我影响很大，以及我学到了什么）At first，it was difficult for me to perform well when I practiced it．【高分句型二】But I've made a lot of progress by exercising for two hours every day．（遇到的困难及解决办法）
Do you love art？Write to me soon．
Best wishes， Gu Hua
【点评】能够根据提示进行书面表达，能够围绕主题准确使用一定的语法、词汇、短语和句型等，清楚连贯地表达自己的思想，进而完成写作任务．
36．今年年初，无锡被评为2013年度内地最宜居城市．假设你班对此进行了一次班级讨论，请你在答题卡指定的位置上用英语写一篇80词左右的发言稿，阐述你的观点和感想．内容提示如下：
1．修建了很多新路，大桥，甚至还有地铁；
2．新添了很多露天开放公园，每到周末和节假日，人们常常去那里野餐，游玩； 3．私家车越来越多，停车（park cars）已成了大问题； 4．城市变化有利有弊； 5．你的希望． 注意：
1．短文须包括所给内容要点，要求语句通顺、意思连贯； 2．第5要点的内容须用2～3句话展开合理想象，作适当发挥； 3．发言稿的开头已给出，不计入总词数．
There have been great changes in Wuxi in the past few years． The government has built lots of new roads，bridges and even undergrounds．There have been a number of openparks．People often go there to have a picnic and have fun on weekends and holidays．More and more people have their own cars and it's become difficult to park cars．The changes have brought both advantages and disadvantages．I hope the government can deal with the problem．Our hometown can be more and more beautiful in the future． ．
【分析】这是一篇提纲作文．内容是谈谈你对无锡被评为2013年度内地最宜居城市的观点和感想．时态主要为一般现在时和现在完成时．人称主要为第三人称． 写作思路：考生需要首先审清主题，围绕主题展开作文． 其次考生可从以下几个方面展开作文，即本文的写作要点： 1．修建了很多新路，大桥，甚至还有地铁；
2．新添了很多露天开放公园，每到周末和节假日，人们常常去那里野餐，游玩； 3．私家车越来越多，停车（park cars）已成了大问题； 4．城市变化有利有弊； 5．你的希望． 常用到的重点短语： a number of 大量的 have fun 玩的开心 both…and…两者都 deal with 处理
比较级+and+比较级 越来越… 【高分句型】
1．People often go there to have a picnic and have fun on weekends and holidays． to have a picnic and have fun 动词不定式做目的状语．
2．①More and more people have their own cars and②it's become difficult to park cars． ①比较级+and+比较级 越来越…
②it是形式主语，后面的动词不定式是真正主语．
【解答】There have been great changes in Wuxi in the past few years．The government has built lots of new roads，bridges and even undergrounds．（修建了很多新路，大桥，甚至还有地铁）There have been a number of open parks．People often go there to have a picnic and have fun on weekends and holidays．【高分句型】（新添了很多露天开放公园，每到周末和节假日，人们常常去那里野餐，游玩）More and more people have their own cars and it's become difficult to park cars．【高分句型】（私家车越来越多，停车已成了大问题）The changes have brought both advantages and disadvantages．（城市变化有利有弊；）I hope the government can deal with the problem．Our hometown can be more and more beautiful in the future．（我的希望）
【点评】本文是一篇给材料作文，短文的开头已经给出．写作时先要围绕这些要点组织材料，确定写作内容，注意将这些要点全部表达出来，并且要有适当的发挥，在谈到自己的观点时，要结合活动内容，写出自己的观点．
37．最近，你们班开展了一次主题班会，主要讨论了作为中学生如何更好地与父母沟通交
流．假如你是李华，请根据下面的内容和要求给父母写一封信．文中不得出现真实的个人信息． 内容提示：
1．告诉父母自己三年来的学习情况和收获： 2．和父母说说自己在成长过程中的一些心里话；
3．表达自己对父母的爱，并告诉父母自己会继续努力学习，不让他们担心，做开心一家人． 注意：
1．词数90左右．信的开头和结尾已经给出，不计入总词数； 2．信中须包括所有要点，不要逐词翻译，可适当发挥； 3．信中不得不得提及真实的人名、校名等相关信息． My dear mother and father，
I will graduate from school soon，and I'd like to talk about______________ Wish you all the best．
Yours Li Hua．
【分析】【高分句型一】
I think I studied hard，made some good friends and was really happy．我认为我努力学习，取得了一些好朋友，真的很开心． I think+宾语从句 【高分句型二】
I will keep on studying hard to get good grades and achieve my dream．我将继续努力学习，取得好成绩，实现我的梦想．
keep on doing sth继续做某事；to get good grades and achieve my dream是不定式表目的． 【解答】My dear mother and father，
I will graduate from school soon，and I'd like to talk about my life and studies in school to you．（要点一：三年来的学习情况和收获）During the past three years．I think I studied hard，made some good friends and was really happy．【高分句型一】But there was probably something wrong between us．（要点二：和父母亲说说心里话）I know you love me so much，but I also know you may be not interested in some of my hobbies，such as playing basketball，playing the guitar and chatting with my friends．They really waste time，but they are parts of my life．So I hope you can encourage and support me to do something that I like．Now I have already grown up a lot．I will keep on studying hard to get good grades and achieve my dream．【高分句型二】Besides，I hope you can spare your time to stay and chat with me，so we can get on better．I love you very much and I believe we will be a happy family forever．（要点三：表达自己的目标） Wish you all the best．
Yours Li Hua．
【点评】能够根据提示进行书面表达，能够围绕主题准确使用一定的语法、词汇、短语和句型等，清楚连贯地表达自己的思想，进而完成写作任务．
38．假设你是李明，你的笔友Peter来信谈到他所居住的城市，并希望了解你家乡无锡的情况，请你用英语写一封回信．内容提示如下： 1．无锡位于中国东部，因太湖（Tai Lake） 而出名； 2．由5个区组成，如梁溪区（Liangxi District）、滨湖区；
3．过去许多工厂经常向湖里倾倒废弃物，最近已经采取措施减少污染； 4．每天我们都能看到一大群游客；每年来无锡的最好的时间是春天； 5．我希望…
注意：1．短文须包括所给内容要点，要求语句通顺，意思连贯； 2．第5要点内容共须用2～3句话展开合理想象，作适当发挥； 3．词数80个左右，短文的开头和结尾句已给出，不计入总词数． Dear Peter，
It's very kind of you to write to me and let me know about your beautiful city．Now I'd like to tell you something about my hometown Wuxi． I'm looking forward to hearing from you．
Yours， Li Ming
【分析】这篇作文叫小作者介绍Peter 所居住的城市．句子要完整，表达准确，注意时态的变化和主谓一致．文中可适当使用一些连接词来加强文章的逻辑性． 高分句型：
①Now I'd like to tell you something about my hometown Wuxi．现在我想告诉你一些关于我家乡无锡的事情．句子中would like to do sth表示想做某事．
②I'm looking forward to hearing from you．我期待着收到你的来信．句子中look forward to doing sth表示期待做某事，后面跟动词的ing形式． 【解答】Dear Peter，
It's very kind of you to write to me and let me know about your beautiful city．Now I'd like to tell you something about my hometown Wuxi．（高分句型）（引出话题） Wuxi lies in the eastern part of China．It is famous for Tai Lake．It is made up of five districts such as Liangxi District and Binhu District．（无锡的地理位置及组成）In the past，many factories put its waste into the lake．Recently the government has taken action to reduce pollution．（无锡过去及现在）Every day we can see a large group of visitors here．The best time to visit Wuxi is （in） spring．（大量游客在春天来游玩）I hope you can come and visit soon．I'll show you around it．I'm sure you'll have great fun．（我的希望）
I'm looking forward to hearing from you．（高分句型）（我的期待）
Yours，
Li Ming
【点评】这篇作文结构清晰完整，表达准确流利，要点齐全．文中有一些好的表达方式如It is made up of five districts such as Liangxi District and Binhu District．Many factories used to put its waste into the lake．等等．
39．请根据下列要点，完成一篇关于介绍上周末你和家人一起去户外野营的情况的短文。 要点：
（1）上周末你和父母一起去野营了，非常激动。 （2）因为你们喜欢待在户外，亲近美丽的山河。
（3）你和爸爸在湖边搭了一个帐篷，然后一起划船，放风筝。 （4）妈妈生火做饭，晚饭后一起在湖边散步。 （5）你永远不会忘记这次野营。
（6）我希望……（用1﹣2句话，谈谈感受）
注意： （1）文章须包括所有内容要点，要求语句通顺、意思连贯； （2）第5要点须用1﹣2句话适当发挥； （3）词数在80左右。 _________
【分析】【高分句型一】
We were very excited because we like staying outside，near beautiful lakes and hills.
我们非常兴奋，因为我们喜欢呆在外面，靠近美丽的湖泊和小山。because因为，引导原因状语从句。 【高分句型二】 What a happy day we had!
我们度过了多么快乐的一天啊！本句使用了感叹句，型结构为：What +a/an+形容词+单数名词+主语+谓语动词！
【解答】Last weekend I went camping with my parents.We were very excited because we like staying outside，near beautiful lakes and hills. 【高分句型一】
（上周末你和父母一起去野营了，非常激动。因为喜欢待在户外，亲近美丽的山河）My father and I put up a tent by the lake，then we rowed a boat and flew a kite.（我和爸爸在湖边搭了一个帐篷，然后一起划船，放风筝。） My mother made a fire and cooked meals.After dinner we went walking by the lake.（妈妈生火做饭，晚饭后一起在湖边散步。）What a happy day we had! 【高分句型二】I will never forget this camping. （永远不会忘记这次野营） I hope we can go camping next time.（希望）
【点评】首先认真审题，看清题目中的要求和要点；然后根据提示内容，列出写作要点及每个要点中可能要用到的表达；然后紧扣要点，动笔写作，在写作过程中，要注意句与句、段与段之间的过渡，必要时可适当运用表示转折、因果、并列、比较等关系的连词，使文章过渡平稳，自然流畅；同时注意语句要通顺，词汇书写无误，不要出现语法错误。最后要细心复核检查，确保正确无误。
40．澳大利亚此次发生了特大丛林火灾，火势蔓延了四分之一的国土．请认真阅读下列导
图，用英文写一篇短文， 贴在 School Newsletter 上．
Big fires
Facts：
●in Australia， in summer， ●hot， dry， less rain； bush fires Results： ●800 buildings ●animals like Koalas ●thick fog … Your feelings： ……
Possible causes： ●humans' activities ●……
注意事项：
1． 短文必须包括以上要点，省略处必须补充细节，做适当发挥； 2． 词数在 80 个左右．开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数； 3． 文中不得出现真实的人名、校名、地名等相关信息； 4． 文章必须写在答题卷对应的位置上，写在试卷其他部分无效． Big fires hit Australia． One quarter of the whole country is on fire．
It's December now but the weather there is ____________________________________． We have only one earth． We should do something to protect our earth． 【分析】【高分句型一】
The forests are so dry that they can catch fire easily on such weather．
森林如此干燥，在这种天气下很容易着火．本句使用了so…that（ 如此……以至于）引导的结果状语从句 【高分句型二】
I feel very sad，although it's a serious natural disaster．
我很难过，尽管这是一场严重的自然灾害．although尽管，虽然，引导让步状语从句． 【解答】Big fires hit Australia． One quarter of the whole country is on fire．
It's December now but the weather there is hot and dry． There's less rain this year than usual． Many bush and forest fires happen． Over 800 buildings fell down． Thousands of Koalas died． There's thick fog everywhere．（描述火灾情况：事实和后果）
Humans' activities mainly lead to these fires． The earth is getting warmer． The forests are so dry that they can catch fire easily on such weather．【高分句型一】（火灾的原因） I feel very sad，although it's a serious natural disaster．（感受） We have only one earth． We should do something to protect our earth．
【点评】书面表达题既不是汉译英，也不是可任意发挥的作文．它要求将所规定的材料内容经整理后展开思维，考查运用所学英语知识准确表达意思的能力．所以，考生不能遗漏
要点，要尽量使用自己熟悉的单词、短语和句式，尽可能使用高级词汇和较复杂的句式结构以便得到较高的分数．
41．新年将至，每位同学将收到来自长辈的红包．初一（1）的同学们在班会课上，关于如何合理地利用零花钱，过一个有意义的新年，展开讨论，各抒己见．要点如下：
方式 买书 为父母 …… 为贫困地区儿童 …… 注意事项：
1． 短文必须包括以上要点，省略处必须补充细节，做适当发挥； 2． 词数在60个左右．开头已给出，不计入总词数； 3． 文中不得出现真实的人名、校名、地名等相关信息； 4． 文章必须写在答题卡对应的位置上，写在试卷其他部分无效．
Spring Festival is coming． Every student can get lots of red packets． Students in Class 1， Grade 7 talk about how to spend their pocket money in the class meeting．
Some students want to_________________________________________________________ 【分析】【高分句型一】
Some students want to buy some books with their pocket money because they can learn a lot from books．
一些学生想用他们的零花钱买一些书，因为他们可以从书中学到很多东西．want to do sth 【高分句型二】
Some want to buy warm clothes or healthy food for the children in poor areas because they don't have enough money to buy them．
一些人想给贫困地区的孩子买暖和的衣服或健康的食物，因为他们没有足够的钱去买． 【解答】Spring Festival is coming． Every student can get lots of red packets． Students in Class 1， Grade 7 talk about how to spend their pocket money in the class meeting．（点题） Some students want to buy some books with their pocket money because they can learn a lot from books． 【高分句型一】Some want to buy presents for their parents because they want to give their thanks to their parents in this way． Some want to buy warm clothes or healthy food for the children in poor areas because they don't have enough money to buy them．【高分句型一】（方式原因）
【点评】能够根据提示进行书面表达，能够围绕主题准确使用一定的语法、词汇、短语和句型等，清楚连贯地表达自己的思想，进而完成写作任务．
原因 …… …… ……
42．请根据所给提示以\"My friend Simon\"为题，写一篇短文介绍你的好朋友Simon，包括以下要点．13岁，来自美国但是现在和家人居住在扬州．学习刻苦，最喜欢的科目是数学和英语，是校足球队成员，周末经常和同学去踢球，经常观看足球比赛，最喜欢的球员是姚明．
注意：（1）要点清楚，语言流畅，字数80词左右
（2）短文须包括所有要点内容，不要逐词翻译，可适当发挥短发，带眼镜，又高又瘦．擅长电脑．
【分析】【高分句型一】
He studies so hard that he always gets good grades．
他学习很努力，总是取得好成绩．so…that…如此…以至于… 【高分句型二】
He wants to be a basketball player like Yao Ming when he grows up．
长大后想成为像姚明那样的篮球运动员．when引导时间状语从句．want to be想成为… 【解答】My friend Simon
I have a good friend．His name is Simon．He is 13 years old．He comes from America．He now lives in Yangzhou with his family．（基本信息）He studies so hard that he always gets good grades． 【高分句型一】His favorite subjects are math and English．（学习）He is a member of the school football team．On weekends， he often plays football and watches football matches with his classmates（周末做什么）．His favorite player is Yao Ming．He wants to be a basketball player like Yao Ming when he grows up．【高分句型二】（最喜欢的球员） 【点评】能够根据提示进行书面表达，能够围绕主题准确使用一定的语法、词汇、短语和句型等，清楚连贯地表达自己的思想，进而完成写作任务．
43．根据所给中文要点，用英语写一篇80词左右的短文介绍你理想中的学校．要求语句通顺，意思连贯．要点：
早上9点开始上课，因此不用早起．
下午3点放学，放学后有很多时间进行课外活动． 吃午饭时可以和朋友们聊天或听音乐．
每天只有一小时的作业，可以花很多时间跟朋友们练习打棒球． 有很多伙伴愿意帮我辅导我的功课，他们都是我的偶像．
My ideal school
_________________． 【分析】【高分句型一】
I spend an hour on my homework every day．
我每天花一个小时做作业．spend…on…在…上花费… 【高分句型二】
We can spend a lot of time practicing baseball with your friends．
我们可以花很多时间和你的朋友练习棒球．spend…doing sth花费…做某事． 【解答】My ideal school
My ideal school is big and beautiful，with a library，a laboratory，a playground and so on．（点题）My ideal school usually starts with morning exercises and starts at 9 o'clock，so we don't have to get up early． The school day finishes at 3：00 p．m．There are all kinds of
activities after school．During lunch， we can chat with your friends or listen to music． I spend an hour on my homework every day．【高分句型一】 We can spend a lot of time practicing baseball with your friends．【高分句型二】Many partners would like to help me with my homework． They are my idols．（具体介绍学校）
【点评】能够根据提示进行书面表达，能够围绕主题准确使用一定的语法、词汇、短语和句型等，清楚连贯地表达自己的思想，进而完成写作任务．
44．疫情之下，越来越多的人选择云游。有的同学喜欢线上云游，有的同学则喜欢线下旅游。21世纪英文报对在校学生进行\"online tour\"的调查问卷。请你根据调查问卷和你的实际情况，写一篇英语短文向报刊投稿。
Questionnaire
（1）Do you like online tour or not？Put a tick （√） or a cross （×） in the box. ▢ONLINE TOUR
（2）What do you think of it？
（3）Why do you like/dislike it？ 注意事项：
（1）短文须包括所有提示内容，可适当发挥，要求语句通顺、意思连贯； （2）词数90左右，作文的开头已给出，不计入总词数； （3）短文中不得提及真实人名、校名等相关信息。
Online tour
Recently，more and more people choose online tour. 【分析】高分句型一：
Taking an online tour is popular and easy now.在线旅游现在很流行也很容易。句子中使用动名词短语做主语。 高分句型二：
First，the Internet is everywhere and people can be connected to it easily.首先，互联网无处不在，人们可以很容易地与之连接。be connected to 意思是与•••连接。 【解答】
Online tour
Recently，more and more people choose online tour.I also prefer this new way of travelling.Taking an online tour is popular and easy now.【高分句型一】（引出话题） There are several advantages of travelling from home.First，the Internet is everywhere and people can be connected to it easily.【高分句型二】Then ，there are different kinds of materials online，like videos，documentaries ，living programmes.Moreover，taking on online tour is money﹣saving.In this way，travelling abroad costs us a little.（喜欢的原因）
In my opinion ，online tour offers me a chance to see different places of interest and opens up a new world to me.（感受）
【点评】能够根据提示进行书面表达，能够围绕主题准确使用一定的语法、词汇、短语和句型等，清楚连贯地表达自己的思想，进而完成写作任务。
45．Do you know the \"Iron Hammer （铁榔头）\"？ She is not a hero from a film like Iron Man 《（ 钢铁侠》）． But she is like a hero to Chinese sports fans． Her real name is Lang Ping （郎平）． 请你根据下 面相关信息写一篇英语短文介绍郎平和中国女排精神以及你感受贴在 Twitter（）的网站 上．
About Lang Ping
Birth year： Birth place：
Nickname： Her story：
1960 Tianjin Iron Hammer
作为运动员，刻苦训练，向世界证 明中国女子够高，够快可以打好排球．作为教 练，带领…鼓励…振作
Team spirit： Achievements：
勤学苦练；团结战斗；永不言弃
Achievements： 多 次 世 界 杯 冠 军（championship ）和金牌；正在备战2020 Summer Olympics．
注意：1．词数 90 词左右；开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数； 2．表达清楚，语法正确，适当增加细节，以使上下文连贯； 3．文中不得出现真实姓名和学校名称．
Lang Ping， known as Iron Hammer， was once a powerful and skilled volleyball player but now is the famous chief coach of the Chinese women's volleyball team． ______．
I believe they are sure to give us another big surprise! 【分析】【高分句型一】
As a volleyball player， she practised hard and proved to the world Chinese women are tall and fast enough to play volleyball．
作为一名排球运动员，她努力练习，向世界证明了中国女子够高，够快可以打好排球．tall and fast enough to play volleyball够高，够快可以打好排球，形容词+enough +to do sth． 【高分句型二】
She thinks the whole team should work hard together instead of giving up．
她认为整个团队应该一起努力而不放弃．instead of 代替，而不是，介词of后跟动名词． 【解答】Lang Ping， known as Iron Hammer， was once a powerful and skilled volleyball player but now is the famous chief coach of the Chinese women's volleyball team．
Lang Ping was born in Tianjin in 1960．（出生地点及日期） Her nickname is Iron
Hammer．（绰号）As a volleyball player， she practised hard and proved to the world Chinese women are tall and fast enough to play volleyball．【高分句型一】 As a coach， she is leading her team to high levels． She always encourages her team members and cheer them up when they are in trouble．（经历） She thinks the whole team should work hard together instead of giving up．【高分句型二】（团队精神）
Through hard work，Chinese women volleyball team has surprised the world by winning world championships and gold medals． Now， they are preparing for the 2020 Summer Olympics．（成绩）
I believe they are sure to give us another big surprise！
【点评】能够根据提示进行书面表达，能够围绕主题准确使用一定的语法、词汇、短语和句型等，清楚连贯地表达自己的思想，进而完成写作任务．
46．英雄源于平凡，在新冠病毒（Novel Corona﹣virus）疫情发生期间涌现出了很多平凡而伟大的英雄，李华的妈妈就是其中之一。她是一位支持武汉医疗队的医生。假如你是李华，请根据以下信息及提示，以\"Mum is my hero\" 为题完成一篇学校\"战疫情\"主题征文。
基本情况 具体行动
1. 医生，40多岁，工作15年。
2. 善良，热心…
1. 面对危险，主动请战，救治病人。 2. 每天工作超过11小时，奋战了一个月。
对我的影响
1. 妈妈微信（WeChat）告诉我……（自拟1﹣2点） 2. 我为妈妈感到骄傲，因为……（自拟1﹣2点）
要求：1）表达清楚，语法正确，上下文连贯； 2）必须包括表格中所有的相关信息，并适当发挥；
3）词数：100词左右（征文的开头已给出，不计入总词数）； 4）不得使用真实姓名、校名和地名等。
Mum is my hero
After the outbreak of Novel Corona﹣virus， many people have done a lot to fight with it. In my heart， they are all heroes and my mother is one of them. ______.
【分析】【高分句型一】
All her patients believed in her because she not only saved their lives but also took them the hope. 所有的病人都相信她，因为她不仅拯救了他们的生命，也给了他们希望。because因为，引导原因状语从句；not only…but also不但……而且…… 【高分句型二】
She told me not to worry about her and it was her duty to save lives.
她告诉我不要担心她，救人是她的责任。tell sb. not to do sth.告诉某人不要做某事；It's one's duty to do sth.做某事是某人的职责。 【解答】
Mum is my hero
After the outbreak of Novel Corona﹣virus， many people have done a lot to fight with it. In my heart， they are all heroes and my mother is one of them.My mum is a doctor. She is in her forties and has worked in People's Hospital for fifteen years. My mum is tall and slim and smiles often. She's kind and warm﹣hearted and she often helps the sick in our community.（基本情况） After hearing of the outbreak of novel Corona﹣virus， my mum offered to join the medical team assisting Wuhan. To work better and save time， she even cut her long hair . In the past month， she worked hard and carefully. She worked for over eleven hours a day and did whatever she could to help the sick. All her patients believed in her because she not only saved their lives but also took them the hope.【高分句型一】（具体行动）
During the stay in Wuhan， my mum sometimes chatted with me on WeChat. She told me not to worry about her and it was her duty to save lives.【高分句型二】She is my hero and I'm proud of her. I hope to be an excellent doctor like her when I grow up.（对我的影响）
【点评】首先认真审题，看清题目中的要求和要点；然后根据提示内容，列出写作要点及每个要点中可能要用到的表达；然后紧扣要点，动笔写作，在写作过程中，要注意句与句、段与段之间的过渡，必要时可适当运用表示转折、因果、并列、比较等关系的连词，使文章过渡平稳，自然流畅；同时注意语句要通顺，词汇书写无误，不要出现语法错误。最后要细心复核检查，确保正确无误。
47．假定你是苏海，你的美国朋友David给你发了下面的邮件，请仔细阅读邮件并根据信中的内容和生活实际用英语回复，可适当发挥．
To：suhai@163．com From：david@hotmail．com Subject：relationship
Dear Su Hai，
I have a problem and I don't know how to deal with it．I have two elder sisters． They're both clever and always do everything well．I feel I can never be as good as them． I am worried about the following problems these days．Can you give me some help？ ◆Should I just be myself or make a change？ ◆How can I let my parents feel proud of me？ ◆Can you share one of your experiences with me？ Best wishes， David
注意：1．词数90左右．短文的开头已经写好，不计入总词数．
2．短文须包含所有要点，不要逐词翻译，可适当发挥，使短文连贯、通顺． 3．短文中不得提及真实的人名、校名等相关信息． Dear David，
Thanks for your email．I'm very sorry to hear that ． I hope my answers will be of some help to you．
Best wishes，
Su Hai
【分析】【高分句型一】
You'd better not compare yourself to your sisters．你最好不要和你的姐妹们比较． had better do sth最好做某事． 【高分句型二】
But I do my best to work hard．但我尽我最大的努力工作． do one's best to do sth尽某人最大努力做某事． 【解答】Dear David
Thanks for your email．I m very sorry to hear that you are very worried these days．（表示同情）
You'd better not compare yourself to your sisters．【高分句型一】I think you just need to be yourself instead of trying to be like someone else．Remember that you and your sisters are all smart in different ways．Develop your own interests，and don't be afraid to fail．You can be as special as your sisters are．In fact，parents love each child．I think they will understand you and feel proud of you．（建议）
My brother often does better in study than me．But I do my best to work hard．【高分句型二】My parents understand me and they often give me help．It doesn't matter who is the best．The most important thing is we should be ourselves and never give up．Then we will feel much better．（分享自己的经历）
I hope my answers will be of some help to you（希望）
Best wishes．
Su Hai
【点评】能够根据提示进行书面表达，能够围绕主题准确使用一定的语法、词汇、短语和句型等，清楚连贯地表达自己的思想，进而完成写作任务．
48．假如你是John，想邀请你的朋友Mike来你家．请你按照下面的提示写一篇邀请函．80词左右．
要点：1．新家位于市中心，住在9楼．
2．邻居们友好善良，志愿者经常帮助人们解决各种问题．
3．路线：可乘地铁到达人民路（Renmin Road），在A出口处出来，沿着这条路走，在第二个十字路口向右拐，你会在右边看见大楼． 4．…． Dear Mike，
I would like to invite you to my new home． _____
Yours John．
【分析】【高分句型一】
they often help people with all kinds of problems他们帮助人们解决各种问题．
help sb with sth 帮助某人做某事． 【高分句型二】
I am looking forward to seeing you at my home我期盼能在我家看到你． look forward to doing sth 期盼做某事． 【解答】Dear Mike，
I would like to invite you to my new home．My new home is in the centre of the city．I live on the ninth floor．（新家位于市中心，住在9楼）My neighbours are friendly and kind．Some of them are volunteers，and they often help people with all kinds of problems．【高分句型一】（邻居们友好善良，志愿者经常帮助人们解决各种问题．）
Here is the way to my home．You can take the underground to Renmin Road．Get out at Exit A．Walk along the road，and turn right at the second crossing，You will see the building on your right．（路线）
I am looking forward to seeing you at my home．（邀请） Yours John
【点评】第一步仔细阅读提示，思考所给信息，假话文章大致内容，第二步根据信息要求遣词造句，造句成文，第三步，通读全文，纠正错误．
49．暑假即将到来，很多家长想让孩子参加暑假，但学生对此意见不一．初二（1）班的学生就\"学生是否应该上暑假\"展开了热烈的讨论，讨论结果如下．
注意：
1．词数90字左右．开头已给出，不计入总词数；
2．包含所有要点，可适当发挥；要求语句通顺、意思连贯、书写整洁； 3．文中不得出现你的真实姓名和学校名称． 【分析】高分句型： 句型一：
Some believe that children should learn as much as possible since they have strong ability to grasp new knowledge．一些人认为孩子们应该趁他们这个年纪学习能力很强的时候去多学习一些新知识．
have ability to do sth有能力做某事 as much as possible 尽可能多 句型二：
Kids learn more skills will be more flexible and smart than those who never attend training classes in doing certain kinds of things．在做某种特定的事情的时候，那些拥有多重技能的孩子会比那些没有参加过培训课的小孩子更加灵活、聪明． who引导的定语从句 training classes 培训课
【解答】答案：It is quite common phenomenon that many parents will bring their children to all kinds of classes as long as their children have weekends or holidays．This kind of situation has been hot discussed among public．Some people hold that children deserve to have play time as much as possible．They have a lot of homework to do，and they don't have much time left．（反对者的观点）
Some believe that children should learn as much as possible since they have strong ability to grasp new knowledge．【高分句型一】Summer classes help them review and learn new content and prepare for the new term．（赞成者的观点）
Standing on my point of view，I'm convinced that children should be sent to training class to learn as much as possible so that they can be more brilliant．Firstly，training class can broaden children's knowledge．For almost all children，they have very limited knowledge．But if they are sent to training class，they can learn various knowledge of life．Thirdly，children can be more outstanding in the future compared with those who don't attend training class．Kids learn more skills will be more flexible and smart than those who never attend training classes in doing certain kinds of things．【高分句型二】（我的观点）
All in all，sending kids to training classes will do a lot of good to children's future．
【点评】写作主要考查学生综合运用英语语言的能力，涉及学生的词汇量，正确运用单词的能力，对所学语法的掌握程度，能否按照英语习惯正确表达所要表达的意思的能力等等．
50．澳大利亚此次发生了特大丛林火灾，火势蔓延了四分之一的国土．请认真阅读以下导图，用英文写一篇短文，贴在 School Newsletter 上．
Big fires
Possible causes （原因）： ●humans' activities ●… Facts：
●hot， dry， less rain ●bush fires， forest fires Results：
●800 buildings fell down ●animals like koalas died ●thick fog everywhere Your feelings： …
注意事项：1．短文内容须包括导图要点，要求表达清楚、语法正确、适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；
2．词数在 80 个左右，首尾已在答题卷上给出，不计入总词数； 3．短文必须写在答题卷指定的位置上． __________________________________________． 【分析】【高分句型一】
If someone smokes in the forest， it can easily lead to forest fires． 如果有人在森林里吸烟，很容易导致森林火灾．if引导条件状语从句． 【高分句型二】
I hope people should strengthen the forest protection， so that such a disaster will not happen again．
我希望人们应该加强森林保护，这样灾难就不会再发生了．I hope+宾语从句．so that引导目的状语从句．
【解答】Australia has been hit by big fires that have spread across a quarter of the country．（点题）
I think there may be two main reasons． First， it may be caused by humans' activities．Second， it may be caused by the weather．（主要原因）It's summer in Australia now． It is very hot and there is less rain，so the forest is very dry．If someone smokes in the forest， it can easily lead to forest fires．【高分句型一】（条件）The forest fires have made 800 buildings fell down，a lot of animals like koalas died．The thick fog is everywhere．The environmental pollution in Australia is very serious．（结果）
I feel sorry about this． I hope people should strengthen the forest protection， so that such a disaster will not happen again．【高分句型二】（感谢）
【点评】能够根据提示进行书面表达，能够围绕主题准确使用一定的语法、词汇、短语和句型等，清楚连贯地表达自己的思想，进而完成写作任务．
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