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写作模式(分析建议类)

1) As is known to all, sth. does bring a lot of benefits to sb. / sth. else. 2) First, it can greatly strengthen …, thereby changing …for the better.(正面分析I) 3) Besides, it can make /render sb. / sth. else better able to… (正面分析II) 4) And best of all, it can help sb.…(正面分析III) 5)But all the above does not mean / follow that we can turn a blind eye to the negative effects sth. brings about. 6) If…, as a succession of scientific studies reveals / implies / suggests, there are more chances that… (负面分析I)

7) In addition, the more ..., the worse... (负面分析II) 8) And worst of all, … (负面分析III) 9) Therefore, a scientific approach must be adopted to the problem of sth. 10) On the one hand, …(建议I) 11) On the other, ... (建议II) 12) In sum, sth. can do sb. / sth. else good or harm, all depending on … (结论句) The Effects of Exercise on Our Health

1) As is known to all, exercise does bring a lot of benefits to our health. 2) First, it can greatly strengthen our hearts, lungs, bones and muscles, thereby changing our whole health for the better. 3) Besides, it can make our brains better able to react to what is going on around us. 4) And best of all, it can help us breed optimism about our tough life.

5) But all the above does not mean that we can turn a blind eye to the negative effects exercise brings about. 6) If you are normally inactive and then, contrary to your usual habit, start a program of undue exercise, as a succession of scientific studies reveals, there are more chances that you have yourself injured. 7) In addition, the more exercise those on a fat-reducing diet take, the more loss of iron they will suffer and the worse their health will get. 8) And worst of all, continual as well as excessive exercise can result in sudden death. 9) Therefore, a scientific approach must be adopted to the problem of exercise. 10) On the one hand, our physical exercise must be based on both progressiveness and regularity. 11) On the other, we must go in for physical exercise according to local as well as health conditions of our own. 12) In sum, exercise can do us good or harm, all depending on how we make use of it.

写作模式(批驳分析类)

1) With the arrival / birth of …, sth. is becoming more and more … in our life. 2) Hit / Affected with this trend, some / many people come to believe / contend that ...(错误观念) 3) But their viewpoint / belief could not arouse any echo in my mind.(作者的立场)

4) It is true that sth. is a key ingredient in one’s …(让步法分析) 5) On any scale of …, in fact, there is almost nothing heavier than sth.. 6) If we see sth. in its true colors, however, it is nothing but… (批驳分析I) 7) ... (进一步阐述) 8) And moreover, laying any undue stress on sth. may lead one to …, as can be easily seen in the cases of …(批驳分析II)

9) Therefore, it is necessary to take a correct attitude towards sth. 10) On the one hand, … (正确看法I) 11) On the other, ... (正确看法II) 12) In sum, sth. means …but not … to our life. (结论句)

My View on the Negative Effects of Some Advertisements

There is no denying the fact that many commercial advertisements carry undesirable messages. They advertise luxury goods, unhealthy foodstuffs and drinks, and sometimes even dangerous or environmentally harmful products such as motor cars. In addition, they may advertise spiritually harmful publications or entertainment. Such advertisements are bound to generate severe consequences if we keep turning a blind eye to them. First, they

encourage people to waste money and resources. Moreover, they set a bad example to youngsters, arousing in them the desire for luxuries instead of teaching them the good habit of leading a simple life-style. In view of the seriousness of the situation, effective measures should be taken before things get worse. For one thing, proper laws and regulations should be worked out and enforced to ban these ads. For another, the pubic should be educated to identify these ads and refuse to buy the products recommended by them. With these measures taken, it will be a matter of time before these ads to become things of the past.

4) My insight into sth.(My outlook on sth. / My understanding of sth.) is bound up with three major factors. 5) Primarily, sth. is so …that …(理由I) 6) …(进一步阐述) 7) Secondly, sth. is also … (理由II) 8) ... (进一步阐述) 9) And most of all, …(理由III) 10) …(进一步阐述) (Para. II) 11) I have (not) much freedom / option in this matter, but I have never found any other way of seeing sth. more reasonable and acceptable than mine. 12) Thus, I will leave no stone unturned during the course of … in order to pave the way for ... (Para. III) My Way of Seeing Life

1) Life may be many things to many people. 2) Some may see it as building up as much material wealth as possible while others may view it as enjoying to the fullest the pleasures each day offers. 3) As far as I am concerned, however, I would prefer to value it as my sole chance to enrich myself with knowledge first, then to serve the society with all my heart, and finally to leave the world without any regrets. 4) My outlook on life is bound up with three major factors. 5) Primarily, life is so wondrous that I am eager to explore it. 6) Set your heart on a mystery and you can find something new; attach more of your mind to a challenge and you can get a sense of success, all of which, however, depends on how much knowledge you have equipped yourself with first. 7) Secondly, life is also short to any

individual like me. 8) The flower you have just kissed for the first time is now fading away while the love from others you have come to cherish more is already on the wane. 9) And most of all, both wondrousness and shortness of life push me to seize every golden minute and every golden chance. 10) Once I idle away the time I am supposed to grasp to study or work for the people, there will be no more hope of making up for it.

11) I have much option in this matter, but I have never found any other way of seeing life more reasonable and acceptable than mine. 12) Thus, I will leave no stone unturned during the course of my college studies in order to pave the way for my meaningful and colorful life.

What Causes Something New 1. 近几年在社会上出现了······2. 导致该现象的原因 3. 分析该现象的社会影响 (原因分析类)

Para. 1: 1) Believe it or not, these years have witnessed a boom in celebrating foreign festivals on the Chinese campus. 2) According to an official report/survey, young people, especially college students, are showing more and more interest in such festivals as Valentine’s Day, April Fools’ Day, Thanksgiving Day and Christmas Day. 3) To get a better sense of the boom, it is necessary for us to find out its causes.

Para. 3: 9) The effects of this change on our college life are positive. 10) On the one hand, it has created more chances for students to gain a better insight into other cultures. (分析I) 11) On the other, it has enriched the college life, thus making the campus a more pleasant place to live on. (分析II) 12) With more and more health and color added to the

trend, I firmly believe, it will certainly bring more benefits to our campus life in the time to come. 1.有人认为该事物······ 理由是······ 2. 也有人认为该事物······3. 我的看法 (各抒己见类)1) Almost everyone would agree that the birth / appearance / arrival / development of sth.… 2) But this agreement ceases to exist just when it comes to…(议论的主题) (Para. I) 3) Many / Some people contend / believe / argue that… (一方观点) 4) They base their contention / belief / argument on the grounds that… (理由I) 5)Besides, as they often point out, ... (理由II) 6)Yet others react to the issue / matter the other way around and hold / assert that the opposite is just reasonable / more acceptable. (另一方观点) 7) From their angle of view, … (理由I) 8) And even worse, as they claim, … (理由II) (Para. II)

9) I am of / adhere to / stick to the opinion / view / truth that anything new, including…, can bring human society fortunes / merits / advantages or misfortunes / demerits / disadvantages, all depending on ... (我的看法) 10) On the one hand, … (理由I) 11) But on the other, ... (理由II) 12) In short, the key / solution to the problem is always controlled in … (结论句)

Views on Cloning

1. 有人认为克隆技术的应用利大于弊, 理由是······

2. 也有人认为弊大于利,······ 3. 我的看法。

1) Almost everyone would agree that the birth of Dolly, as the first clone of an adult animal, has opened a new way of seeing the creation of life for the world. 2) But this agreement ceases to exist just when it comes to whether cloning will bring fortunes or misfortunes to human society. 3) Many contend that the merits of cloning will outrun its demerits. 4) They base their contention on the grounds that cloning is the most effective method of saving the rare wild lives from dying out. 5) Besides, as they also point out, cloning can help provide better ways to treat some serious or deadly sicknesses, such as diabetes, and Parkinson’s disease. 6) Yet others react to the issue the other way around and hold that the opposite is just reasonable. 7) From their angle of view, cloning will threaten the ecological balance by destroying the natural reproduction through the enjoyment of sexual love between the male and the female. 8) And even worse, as they reveal, cloning will bring greater disasters to human society if it is used in creation of individuals with extreme genetic qualities, like terrorists, desperate scoundrels, and war manias.9) I stick to the opinion that anything new, including cloning, can bring human society fortunes or misfortunes, all depending on how it is exploited. 10) On the one hand, it will be an inestimable blessing to the human world if it is applied to reproduction of best dairy cows or other choice domestic poultries. 11) But on the other hand, it will form a big threat to human society once it is abused in copying those hostile toward humanity. 12) In short, the solution to the problem is always within man’s reach.

Is a Test of Spoken English Necessary?

A test of spoken English will be included as an optional component of College English Test (CET). As for it, different people hold different opinions.

Some people argue that it is absolutely necessary to hold a test of spoken English in China because we have been informed frequently that a Chinese student who has been learning English for over ten years cannot even communicate with a native speaker. A

test of spoken English will bring the college students an awareness of the importance of oral English, and will thus help them with their communicating skills.On the other hand, some others still maintain that a good command of reading and writing skills will be enough for the English learners. To some extent their opinion derives from the fact that students are already under considerable pressure from their coursework. Another required test will only add to their burden.In my opinion, a test of spoken English will do more good than harm. Since China will continue its policy of opening and reform, the ability to speak English fluently is a must for anyone who wants to surpass others in a highly competitive society. Whether I take the test or not, I shall spare no efforts to practice oral English in the remaining years of my college study.

考试作文开头写作技巧

要素之一: Restatement of the Topic

大作文的题目都会给出相关情景或话题,在首段中应先对题目中的情景或话题进行展开。

 方法一 : 改写。即按照题目所给的内容,用不同的表达方 法重新写一遍,千万不

能抄袭。

注意 :改一两个词不算改写,一定要将整个表达方式改掉。

 方法二:自己展开。即根据题目所谈到的话题内容适当展开,简单谈谈目前社会中

的情况怎样。

注意: 不要谈的太多,更加不能偏题,与题目话题毫不相干。 要素之二: Express Your Opinion

大作文的题目中一般会问你 do you agree or disagree 或 what do you think 等,因此必须与之相对应的在首段中表明你的观点。

 方法一:中立观点(即辩证表达)。即可以说某种做法既有好又有坏;对某种观点

又有人同意又有人不同意等等。

说明: 比较好的表达如:I partly agree with the opinion expressed above. 不要说:some people agree while others don't agree.这可不是中立地表达自己的观点。 所谓中立,其实是辩证的关系!老外看问题比较辩证,一般不会一棍子打死。

要素之三: No Excessive Background

 大作文首段中只要涵盖以上两要素即可,不要写过多不相干的展开内容,更不要将

理由(即主体段的分论点)写进去,否则主体段就没内容写了。  一般第1段的词数还是控制在40词左右为宜! 开头方法

(1)引用 Knowledge is power. Knowledge is the foundation of one’s development. So we should try to gain more knowledge. Reading extensively is an effective way in getting knowledge.

(2) 提问Nowadays, the desire for good health is universal. …However, which do you think is the best way to keep healthy?

 Why should I chose to attend college? Is the four-year academic life worthwhile?… (3) 开门见山 Reading is important for us. For English majors, extensive reading is a very important way to improve English…

(4) 间接开头 Nowadays we can see ads on TV every day . Some people believe that ads on TV can bring us benefits, but others don’t think so. In my opinion, I am in favor of the advertising on TV.

(5)概括 Recently, people in modern society live under a lot of pressure from education, career or family. We often hear cases of going mad or committing suicide by those who cannot handle them well. So, keeping a good mood becomes a hot topic.

用于句首提出论题或现象的句型

①Recently , …has become the focus of the society .

②…has been playing an increasingly important role in our day-to-day life . ③Nowadays there is a growing concern for … ④Nowadays it is common to hear /see …

⑤…has become a common occurrence in our daily life .

⑥Nowadays more and more people are beginning to be aware of the seriousness of … ⑦It is only during the last /past few years that man has become generally aware that …

⑧There is an old / popular saying / proverb which says / goes … ⑨In recent years , there is a general tendency …

⑩Nowadays … has become a problem we have to face .

 6)用于结尾的常用句型

 ①From what has been discussed / mentioned above , we may conclude that …

②Therefore , it is not difficult to draw / come to the conclusion that … ③It is high time that something was done about …

④From all the reasons / consideration above , it is evident / clear / obvious that …

⑤Taking into account all these factors , we may reach the conclusion that … ⑥Given the reasons / consideration I have just outlined / discussed / presented , I strongly recommend that …

⑦It is clear , therefore , that … ⑧All in all ,…

⑨It is essential that effective measure be taken to …

⑩From what has been discussed above , we may reasonably arrive at the conclusion that …

⑾ In conclusion ,the most important is …

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